This was a really cool little experience; really unsettling like what others have said. The way the music got more jarring as each loop occurred was really offputting in a good way; it gave me a little bit of a jump the first time the guy came back.
I can tell this little experience is close to your heart after reading some of the things you’ve said, and I think I can relate to the story you’re trying to tell. I think you told it really well too; good job.