Hi Ertal Games!
I think that it goes without saying this game is really good.
I'm completely in love with the Characters.
I love how Eddy is kind of weary of William at the beginning and that Eddy isn't the cliche "I'm afraid of people opinion's" kind of guy. I also love his sympathy for Chris (a bit of his soft side). And honestly he's a greatly written Character.
William: I don't really have a character read on him... but its fair to say this character despite having a slightly weird start with his "Sodomite" remark is going to be quite treasured by the MC (I think). And I'm still really curious about what his reward for the bet will be *wink wink* *nudge nudge*.
Chris : My sympathy levels rose from 100 to 500. When he was telling his story I felt reaaalllyy bad. I think that Chris would be (as you've confirmed ) a really good romance route because if it turns out that he murdered Eddy's mom then I feel like if Eddy fell in love with his mother's murderer ... man... But still Chris is another perfect part of the puzzle...
The backgrounds were really well done... And the sprite art was fairly good for a demo=). I really have no complaints about it ....
I think this is probably one of the first thrillers I've ever read/played and I already have really high expectations :)
The bigesst issue I'd say I had was the fact that the demo was soooo short ...
I wish you good luck (and lots of energy drinks because only who knows ho much effort it takes to write these games)
- Sapphire
P.s I see you researched this