Oh cmon, that was fenomenal!
I really loved that game from the very beginning when you have to play pong and then suddenly you get brought into the plot. Great visual novel that is designed perfectly so I didn't get bored at any part. Most of jam games were lying in almost everything, while playing yours I had to be really cautious to consider what is a lie and what is not, so it was really entertaining.
Also graphics are amazing, I really like the mood and your style. Voices are really nicely made and they are creepy at times (like they should). There might be more variety of music, but it was really cool anyway.
I want to be critical, but I just can't. Great job :)