Oooh...
I love the jokes ("why are they so massive", omygod xD), i love these characters and i love how the story manages me to get all emotional
Might be spoilers ahead
I feel VERY... strange about second chapters ending. Not only wasnt i given any choise about confession but it also conflicted wth my previous choices (flirting with certain tiger for example (I just hope Kitoa will get his own huge part, i love him x3), or MC's desire to tell the truth about himself). Not to mention that... lets say, Ross' "friendly behaviour" felt REALLY out of character (i honestly did hit "attack" button at first). Sure, if you wont hit him, it would be explained, but i honestly thought he was posessed or something... All in all, way too creepy
The third chapter... omg, it was awesome, even though i got the first ending at first ><
Nice Taylor twist, i really was shocked, and loved his "true" behaviour. Well, i like these "drop the act" moments in general xD
Also, have to say, i was reading all at once and ive felt a lot of impovement in writing and art thoughout the process, it was really cool to see, youre doing an amazing job here! Hope to read it further x33