Damn....
I liked Bakara... I like sly funny characters in general. I was really sad to see her dying under the rage of Alex, even if deserved
OKAY i know she was a liar, trusted oone and stuff but damn
Haru is being a HUGE tsundere x)
Yet, i kinda saw something like "i will deny i admire him" in his own route. Given that he and mc knew each other for a very short time and he opened up, means that he IS emotional but doesn't show this.
Same with volleyball team. He insults everyone in the team, acts like an asshole and... keeps being there, keeps playing, even threw a thantrum when they lost a match. Meaning that he cares
(about "looking like hes inlove" - Kiga hinted that Haru indeed admires Sho. My guess is that he has a crush too, though its debatable. BUT i wouldnt be surprised if in Jun's or Kei's route they will end up dating or hooking up xD)
Damn, these were quite intense few days!
First of all, i honestly wanted to say that i delayed reading of this story cos of the artstyle, YET here i am, with jumping heart and stupid smile. I really am amazed by your choise of way to create sprites and cgs. There arent ANY fvns that do the same, and its truly unique, something i managed to understand and love. What bothered me at the start, i didnt mind at all when got used to (very fast too)
Then i wanna praise the amount of balls you have. Killing children on screen - that requitres guts, even in horror games, even in not so big projects. Both times were really impressive and even though i play and watch horrors quite a lot, they gave me shivers
I love the story, i love the way you develop characters and even though i didnt see enough romanse, scenes i saw were really cute x3
I only hope this hiatus will end in forseeble future, cos it was a really good expreience for me, and i definetely want more
(also, presonal complaint: not enough save slots imo. I like to save in different places to re-read some pieces of dialogues, but with what i was given i had to be really careful with where i saved. And still in the end i got six slots left)
As much as i like this update, i cant not to adress it: lots of typos. Wrong pronouns, tautology, missed parts of sentences (there were fewer of these but still) and some other stuff
I dont mean to tease or scold you about them, happens to all of us, just saying, it was a little strange.
Other than that, it was pretty cute, cant wait for more spooky things to happen x3
Holy shit, thats a HUGE cliffhanger
Also, i wanted to adress this for some time now and this update is a nice occasion x)
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On the 30th day, before thier first "official date" Aki revealed that he knew about mc dating Sho. BUT few days after (36-7th, give or take) both him and MC acted like that conversation havent happened. Is it just me or its really strange?
I mean, at first i saw "we talking about you two dating for a while", then MC said "i knew you were hiding something!" few days after, sounds like total amnesia to me x)
Oooh...
I love the jokes ("why are they so massive", omygod xD), i love these characters and i love how the story manages me to get all emotional
Might be spoilers ahead
I feel VERY... strange about second chapters ending. Not only wasnt i given any choise about confession but it also conflicted wth my previous choices (flirting with certain tiger for example (I just hope Kitoa will get his own huge part, i love him x3), or MC's desire to tell the truth about himself). Not to mention that... lets say, Ross' "friendly behaviour" felt REALLY out of character (i honestly did hit "attack" button at first). Sure, if you wont hit him, it would be explained, but i honestly thought he was posessed or something... All in all, way too creepy
The third chapter... omg, it was awesome, even though i got the first ending at first ><
Nice Taylor twist, i really was shocked, and loved his "true" behaviour. Well, i like these "drop the act" moments in general xD
Also, have to say, i was reading all at once and ive felt a lot of impovement in writing and art thoughout the process, it was really cool to see, youre doing an amazing job here! Hope to read it further x33
SPOILER ALERT
Strangely, it was shorter that i thought but i guess ive read two builds in a row before
First of all, this update has an awesome representation of anger issues and, i guess, severe post-traumatic stuff, i loved every episode of it. It really FEELS like a problem that Alex will need to confront sooner or later and i indeed see that he struggles with his rage for control, its really cool
But the end of he day is just... i dont know, it was something like this:
Alex: I NEED answers! You, algorithm, you wanna talk the extinction of my race out?
Loken and Byte: the hell are you doing, dont break our trust please
Alex: ugh, i strived the knowledge and it bit me in the ass
Also Alex: oooof, i cant sleep, why dont i fuck around with this exact knowledge some more? What could possibly go wrong?
I mean, sure, he is NOT stable now, with these outbursts and stuff, but even with the theory about Byte it looks like surprizingly dumb move
This might change in future updates but i think there will be a LOT to talk about in the morning...
Not to offend anyone, of course, i still love this vn >~>