Very interesting book with lots of mysterious endings that spark imagination. If I had read this when I was young, certainly I would remember this for years, hell I still might - lots of cryptic stuff to turn over in your head. The writing is really unforced and natural feeling.
{SPOILER ALERT}
I especially love a single page in this book that is illustrated but not referenced. It kind of makes the whole thing for me, and it's so timeless to those old cyoa books. Also the lead-up reminds me of a certain classic creepypasta comic called the bongcheon-dong ghost.
A few linkage errors here and there, the most critical is:
P.48 referencing to go to P.61, should be P.62 I think
I guess a bunch to do with unlinked stopwatch interactions.
P.12 is unlinked (to P.15)
P.14 is unlinked (to P.9)
P46 is unlinked to P.48
P.64 is unlinked to P.66
not an error per se, but you can bypass pilfering the pocket watch - seems a little weird as it is important to the story. (P.9)
hmmm I wonder if I'll ever really know totally whats going on in this and thats the beauty of it. grats on the release.