Honestly,one of the best review we've had on the submission page by far.Thanks for sharing some of you knowledge with us and hopefully in my third game i will have learned everything to not make the same mistakes from this game again.
I am sorry for the english errors in the narrator's dialog but i put a lot of my attention into the functionality of the game,even though i didn't tested everything(sorry for that) and i let Marian write the dialogs and even though i saw the mistakes, were too many and we had like 5 more minutes until the submission window closed,but there is something to learn from and it's a good thing,I wanted to implement a dialog button but Marian already wrote the code for the subtitles and at the time i said to myself that it's a short game and nobody will get bored:)
Thank you again for taking the time and writing such an elaborate opinion,good luck in any future jams, hope you'll win another!