I couldn't really beat the part where you had to jump on these platforms and on the short one there was an enemy, but it seemed to be fun. I really enjoy graphics, music and mood of it.
It would be nice if you could skip the texts as I read them 3 times faster than narrator and I just wanted to go to next part already. It would be good to make level difficulty progress a bit slower as I couldn't beat that fragment (I know I'm not really good at platformers.
Anyway, solid work :)