I was very amazed at the quality of this work! The role language felt very natural and immersive. I had not even considered the possibility of removing all commas and periods from dialogue... Definitely something I'll have to think about especially when there's quite a strict character limit before line breaks involved!
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Thank you so much for checking out our version, it means a lot! From our own experience translating this and also checking out other groups' work, I think we've found there's a lot we can improve on for next time :)
But yeah, I've noticed that many JA localizations tend to remove periods (and sometimes also commas) for dialogue in favor of full-width spaces, so we decided to follow that route.