Personally (I'm writing this when I haven't finished the whole demo yet, so I may have to go back and edit some things later, I wanted to write this more than anything because there is a scene that I think needs to be corrected and with my memory, I was afraid that I ended up forgetting hahaha) I have been liking the game so far, from the mechanics with the dice to the way in which you have represented it artistically, the characters are extremely lovable and interesting, it is true that I miss the back button a little the texts (I tend to be a little clumsy and sometimes I skip a page without finishing reading it lmao) I appreciate all the care you have also put into the different possibilities depending on whether the die has had a much larger number than necessary or if you have barely managed to pass it.
About the mistake I saw in one scene, when Lairen was searching for food in the forest and started raining it said "[…] The cold settles in quickly since he is still wet from falling into the river earlier." the thing is I succeed in that scene, so Lairen didn't fall in the river, I tried to go back to that scene and doing it again just in case I was wrong and I was playing the route when Lairen indeed fallen (I was curious about what happened if you failed) and even then there was the same text saying Lairen had fallen into the river.
One last question, will Lairen always be the bottom? As I said before, I haven't finished the demo so I don't know if there will be many more nsfw scenes, but so far that seems to be the case, I'm asking this more than anything out of curiosity, there aren't many games where the couples are switch and personally The dynamic of this couple would fit quite well, it would be a shame if it didn't, anyway, good job, the game is super well done! < 33