Really liked your composition!
I feel like some of the instruments break the "feel" of the song sounding a bit MIDI-ish compared to others,
But overall great!
I will have to agree with Aurelien & Jofes about the challange's essence though,
The amen break barely "breaks" through (lol).
I get how incorporating it kinda ruins the vibe of the song,
if you ask me I prefer it that way as it's very cool sounding but it does miss the challange's point.