I had trouble keeping sorted through the early parts of the fight and it felt kind of slow once the dwarf took the upper hand, but I think this is one of the better implementations of the theme Ive read so far =)
I wouldn't call it a fight. A young dark elf noble with no combat training vs a grizzled veteran dwarf guild lord is going to be one sided no matter how you look at it. He wasn't fighting him, he was expressing a point, before removing the threat to his family permanently.
