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I had a fun time reading this story, and despite occasional stutters the story (and especially the banter) flowed well. I do feel a little disconnected from the story unless I go back to previous jams and seek out the previous Captain Magma stories - I think the trial setting would have provided a good opportunity to go into a small amount of additional detail about the Fire Snappers' "crimes" and give the context this story really needs to stand alone.