This one was very much still the beginning of learning to write for visual novels, not sure I'll come back to it any time soon. I wrote it like a novel and then reformatted it in visual novel format. Which explains most if not all the text and dialogue weirdness.
Glad you could still find enjoyment in it! Thank you again for your nice comment and overall thoughts!
Ah no wonder! It gave me a lot of novel vibes which I found enjoyable, I like the progression of how you became used to formatting text for visual novels (since I literally played through your vns apologies if I spammed you ":)) ) but I still found that despite the weirdness of the overall text, I enjoyed the overall theme and message conveyed!
Still, kudos for your development and improvement!
