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Honestly this project needs serious editing and I hope they accept help with it, my brain wouldn't allow me to continue with it with how bad it currently is.


This isn't meant as an insult or dig at the project, but it really needs some editing and wouldn't take long at all to fix things up.

I agree, visually, it's great, good pacing too, it's just the dialogue and grammar issues.

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I wouldn’t mind help. I have an editor but we dropped contacted and idk. I’m willing to put more effort if your still offering help.

absolutely!