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Dimal city (ABDL/Diaper friendly city)

This is now updated on 3/9/23 I updated James but only did a bit sadly. · By Maxi_ABDL1908

editing and grammar

A topic by MrTwister created Jan 20, 2024 Views: 213 Replies: 10
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I was wondering if you would like an editor for your stories, and possibly even some custom artwork for specific scenarios. I need to get back into making art, and this seems like a decent place to start. your story for the Dom/Daddy wolf was decent, but very short and has a lot of grammatical errors. it's not a bad thing if it was intended as baby or cub speak, but it breaks the immersion. message me if you are interested.

Honestly this project needs serious editing and I hope they accept help with it, my brain wouldn't allow me to continue with it with how bad it currently is.


This isn't meant as an insult or dig at the project, but it really needs some editing and wouldn't take long at all to fix things up.

I agree, visually, it's great, good pacing too, it's just the dialogue and grammar issues.

Developer(+1)

I wouldn’t mind help. I have an editor but we dropped contacted and idk. I’m willing to put more effort if your still offering help.

absolutely!

Developer

We need to find a common messaging app though. Just Send where I can get a hold of you here in a reply.

Wish there was a way to DM here, not super confident sharing personal contact in a shared space like this, though I do agree a better form of contact would be necessary.

DM's on itch would be a great addition in all honesty. 

Developer

get ahold of me through this account if need be!

you can find me on instagram as jeremytwister, just shoot me a message there, also scope out my other profession. I'm a balloon artist, but looking to get into game dev. even if its just as a proofreader/editor

Developer

I sent you a message rq