Amazing! You have so much in this game, I absolutely love it!
I would definitely recommend working on it though. There is a lot you could do. Increase the aesthetic by adding in some ambiance, make the notes easier to read and more informative and digestible, as well as make it easier for the player to escape the beasty...I speak from experience--dying 3 times in practically the same position and way.
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