Liked the first chapter. Good start. Like the dynamic between characters and can't wait to see how it will work as the story goes on.
Wrong pronoun

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One more thing, isn't it supposed to be Moriarty?

Liked the first chapter. Good start. Like the dynamic between characters and can't wait to see how it will work as the story goes on.
Wrong pronoun