This is so rough I do not have much productive feedback to give. I think your best bet is to lean heavily into deranged schizocore and create an abstract experience like Yume Nikki. That's the only reason I imagine someone playing this.
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The art style has its issues but at least one is because of a weird resolution issue I couldn't fix.
I only kinda accepted the uglyness because it's what I ended up with and I wanted to get other stuff done.
Maybe at some point, I could make it so cutscene art has proper shading.
But at the very least, only the main world is supposed to be dream-like.
Other settings at least look better in my head, because I wanted to give the idea of a "fake crossover" with the variety of characters.