OK, here are my first impressions after a couple of hours of playing the game:
- the girls are cute;
- the story is engaging;
- not too many characters, at least for now. I prefer less characters and their evolution rather than too many that we don't see much;
- I liked the funny bits;
- I appreciate that we have the choice to go bisexual or lesbian;
- I hope to see Lily soon ;) ;
- I have to disagree about your writing; I really don't think it's mediocre, on the contrary, it's better than many other games I've played;
- the only 'negative' comment I would give is about that very large pink text box. It takes about 1/4 of the screen and I would like to have a setting which would enable to adjust the transparency
So, all in all, I enjoyed the game so far. I'm gonna replay it with different choices to see more content. Keep up the good work. Eager to see the next update. Thanks.