Thanks for taking the time to reply. Please be more gentle and supportive of yourself. You have nothing to apologize for.
Professionally made games do not guarantee an enjoyable experience. If anything, I'm of the opinion that it is the indie game space that carries the passion and creativity of projects and ideas forward for video games more often than not these days.
This is a nice game. I enjoyed the writing and the art, I appreciated the inclusion of multiple paths/routes to play through, and the characters were interesting enough that I wanted to learn more about them both. After seeing all there was to see, I was just left hoping the stories would be continued someday, but even if not they reached a nice point of progression as it stands. It is my hope that more games like this may exist in the future, especially within this genre as they are few.
It's made all the more impressive knowing how short the usual game jam development cycles tend to be that you managed to provide this much content.
Thank you again to you and your collaborator(s) for making this game possible and freely sharing it with everyone.