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I started with v0.1.9 and now on v0.2.0 and really enjoying the experience! I just wanted to note here an issue I have come across a few times in both versions. 

When you visit a "?" space and you get the same event and reward a second time, the game seems to soft lock for me, with the "Continue" button becoming inactive when claiming the same reward in the 2nd instance.

I've had this happen with the demon shield, as well as the glory hole when it heals 10 HP. It seemed okay when other results happened for the same ? event (demon sword, then demon shield worked fine) but when you have an identical result a second time, this seems to happen for some event types.

All that said, I am playing the Windows build on Linux via Wine, so if this issue is not possible to reproduce normally, it may be something that only happens in my more obscure situation. Either way, I figured I should mention it just in case it is impacting others too.

Regardless, I'm really appreciating the variety and high replay value of the game so far, and I'm looking forward to future updates too.

I'd appreciate being able to see some basic statistics information in the Analytics page (or within an individual Collection itself) that shows how many views that our Collections have been getting.

It could be something like the "Posts" section of the Dashboard, which shows the number of views and likes of each Blog post, but apply that for Collections we've created.

And if possible, having a list like the "Referrers" section currently in Analytics, except it displays the numbers and URLs for the outgoing links clicked from any of our pages (Profile, Library, Collections, etc.) and not just the incoming links.

I have questions like: How many people are engaging with the Collections I've made? What Collections are the most popular, and what ones are not getting as many eyes on them? How many clicks are going to each specific game in a Collection? Which games are people visiting most from my Collection pages?

Things of this nature are what I'm really curious about most, and I don't see a way to determine this kind of information from our Dashboards or Analytics pages by default. Have I simply overlooked something that is available like this already?

Thanks for the detailed reply!

Oof, Many times of seeing that screen and I guess I still missed it. I will have to look more carefully! Appreciate the tip!

With the mouse controls mention, it wasn't a complaint or anything. I'm familiar enough with RPG Maker MV to more or less know what to expect with mouse movement.

I was surprised that mouse controls worked fine for completing most areas, and just in case anyone else was trying to play it all the way through via mouse, I mentioned it so they would know it's mostly viable, but maybe not 100% unless they have a lot of patience and good reflexes.

And yeah... RMMV makes it difficult to modify certain options, like Auto Dash, by default. It's a manual, extra process to change it, as you mentioned. Not a big deal though. As long as people open the options menu to know it exists, they can easily change it themselves.

Since I'm not very familiar with it, I never would have guessed the reference to the Guilty Gear franchise with the name, but that makes it more amusing knowing there was that kind of meaning behind it.

I enjoyed this game, and managed to find all the endings except for the second-to-last one on the list. I'm guessing it has something to do with that bear in the princess' room, but it still gives the same clue as before to "see more of the world" even after completing the game and seeing all the other endings. I tried everything I could think of, but maybe I'm just forgetting or missed something. Any hints on where I need to revisit or what I should be looking for?

Below I'll just add some thoughts on my experience...

The parts of the game that gave me the most trouble were the mysterious forest (figuring out how to progress, and catching the minor visual differences) the docks (surprisingly, trying to get all the endings there took me quite a few tries before I caught on) and the very last section was tough just to get through in time, but that's to be expected for the challenge to be the greatest at the end of the game of course.

Most of the game worked okay with mouse controls too, but because of how RPG Maker handles the path finding for that, some sections of the game, like the swamp and the last area especially, required too precise movement or timing for mouse controls to really work out well when there was also a time limit to contend with.

It was pleasantly free of errors during my play time too. My hat's off to you for that. It must have taken a lot of testing and tweaking the timing on everything to get it just right and error-free.

I think I noticed a few lines of dialog where the name box was shown as the princess when it was supposed to be a different character (in the potion shop in the city for example there was a line like that) but other than maybe 2 or 3 times of noticing that happen during the whole game, I didn't see much else amiss, and that's already a super minor issue anyways.

I would definitely suggest defaulting to "auto dash ON" in future updates or failing that, players can go into the options and turn it on themselves. I'm pretty sure certain parts of the game would be impossible to clear in time without dashing, or at least extremely difficult.

Also, since you named the project "Forward Punch" originally I'm assuming, it was slightly confusing at first to see the name of the folder when it extracted. The title is long though so, maybe even shortening it to "TPPPPPP" would still be a bit much. (Love the creative alliteration in the title too by the way.)

Overall though I had a lot more fun with this than I anticipated going into it, and I felt it was really creative and well put together.

I actually have started a sort of "Making of Petalpelago" tutorial project where I walk through the steps I took, including showing the prompts and everything that I used. I've attached a few relevant screenshots from it here. It's not even half-finished yet though, and my subscription ran out for Novel AI, and I can't currently renew it for the time being, so that's why things are "on hold" status for now. I'd like to continue with it, and Petalpelago too, sometime in the future if I'm able to, but I'm just not sure when or if that'll happen yet.

A lot of the text was just hand written, and times when I did use the AI to prompt, I'd just try a few generations until something came up that I liked. If it was particularly good, sometimes I let the AI "run with it" on its own a little bit and see what it came up with, and made manual adjustments as needed, and then I'd take back over with the writing again and go for awhile. Back and forth like that pretty much. If I had to put it into numbers, I'd guess I wrote about 2/3 by hand and let the AI write 1/3 and adjusted it as needed.

I really was just getting started with using AI in the few months that I worked on this, so I don't think there's anything I did that couldn't be easily explained by beginners guides you can already find online. I hadn't even gotten an understanding of what all the settings in the lorebook and each advanced setting in Novel AI even did, let alone how to use them well.

Here was one of the image prompt guides I used, for example: https://aituts.com/novelai-anime-prompt-techniques/

And with the image generator, I remember I was using the NAI Diffusion Anime V3 model, I tended to stick to the default Euler sampler one too, and left the steps setting alone so as not to waste the Anlas, but I did find I got better image results most of the time by adjusting the Guidance to 6 instead of the default 5, but the 5 wasn't bad either.

Then it's all just a matter of trying different combinations and weights of prompts and negative prompts to fine-tune the output of everything. It took a lot of generations to start getting results that I wanted, and depending on the complexity of the prompt I could generate hundreds of "bad" results before I got "good" or even "decent" ones that matched what I was looking for sometimes. Other times the AI just didn't understand how to output the results I was looking for, no matter what combination of prompts I tried.

I definitely recommend at least trying the unlimited image generation package for one month for that reason alone, because you can really go all out with it.

Here is an example set of prompts for the flowery images to give you an idea of what I used:

Prompts:

nsfw, nude, solo, uncensored, 1girl, highly detailed facial features, realistic, best quality, highres, masterpiece, beautiful detailed background, mature female, intricate details, beautiful detailed girl, beautiful detailed face, beautiful detailed eyes, colorful background, cinematic lighting, light particles, light diffusion, background full of flowers, limited palette, flowers in full bloom, pastel color, petals, sparkling eyes, beautiful detailed flowers, floral background, flowers fill the screen, garden, flat color, dynamic angle

Negative Prompts:

lowres, bad anatomy, bad hands, text, error, missing fingers, extra digits, fewer digits, cropped, worst quality, low quality, normal quality, jpeg artifacts, signature, watermark, username, blurry, poorly drawn hands, poorly drawn face, mutation, deformed, bad proportions, extra arms, extra legs, missing arms, missing legs, out of frame, distorted perspective, cross-eyed

Wow. And I thought the ending for v0.6 was crazy... you have done amazingly well with all of this. What a fantastic and fascinating experience. I won't put spoilers here, but suffice to say it'll be very interesting to see v0.8 when the time comes.

Edited to add: Thank you very much for always including the walkthrough guide PDF as well. I find it very helpful to make sure I am not missing anything, and get the most enjoyment out of the experience.

This was my favorite chapter yet. I especially enjoyed how the final scene culminated (I appreciated the punchline/word play too) but I won't spoil it here.

    "Ariana wondered what the guy must be thinking on the other end as she pushed the dildo in deeper, before then pulling it out. MJ’s pussy perfectly forming to the shape of the toy."

#E  "Ariana wondered what the guy must be thinking on the other end, as she pushed the dildo in deeper, before then pulling it back out. MJ’s pussy perfectly formed to the shape of the toy."

    if anal == False:

        show bg sc541 with dissolve

    "Ariana couldn’t help but speed up her thrust, moving the dildo in and out faster and faster."

#E  "Ariana couldn’t resist speeding up her thrusts, moving the dildo in and out faster and faster."

    if anal == True:

        show bg sc542p with dissolve

    else:

        show bg sc542 with dissolve

    "She could hear MJ grunting now, seemingly not even trying to hold back anymore."

    show bg sc543 with dissolve

    "Ariana looked up to see how her conversation must be going only to find her now texting and scrolling on her facebook."

#E  "Ariana looked up to see how her conversation must be going, only to find her sister now texting and scrolling on her Facebook."

    "Ariana had gotten so into it, she hadn’t even noticed that the call was done."

    "And yet, MJ still wasn’t saying anything, acting as if nothing at all was happening."

    a "Hey, MJ."

    mj "Yeah?"

    "Her tone was almost apathetic despite the heavy breathing she was doing simultaneously."

    a "........."

    a "You don’t mind me doing this to you?"

    mj "Not really. You can do more if you want."

    show bg sc544 with dissolve

    a "In that case you mind getting on your back and playing with your clit."

#E  a "In that case, you mind getting on your back and playing with your clit?"

    mj "Sure."

    show bg sc550 with dissolve

    "MJ casually rolled on to her back, keeping her knees in the air."

#E  "MJ casually rolled onto her back, keeping her knees in the air."

    if anal == True:

        show bg sc545p with dissolve

    else:

        show bg sc545 with dissolve

    "And while she hadn’t stopped her texting, her other hand was softly rubbing her clit like she had been told."

    if anal == True:

        show bg sc548p with dissolve

    else:

        show bg sc548 with dissolve

    "She didn’t stop even when Ariana pushed the toy dildo back inside her pussy."

    if anal == True:

        show bg sc547p with dissolve

    else:

        show bg sc547 with dissolve

    a "Hey. I’m going to fuck you whenever I want from now on. Okay?"

    mj "Sounds good."

    a "And you are going to fuck me whenever I want."

    mj "Uh huh."

    a "Because you are my fucktoy that I can use however I want?"

    mj "Pretty much."

    show bg sc549 with dissolve

    "Just like that. No arguing or complaining whatsoever. Not even an iota of embarrassment."

    "Ariana knew she shouldn’t be but she couldn’t help but get excited for how she was going to use her sister from now on."

#E  "Ariana knew she shouldn’t be, but she couldn’t help but feel excited thinking about how she was going to use her sister from now on."

    jump chapter2

    show bg sc501 with fade

    "It was later that night. The house was quiet, and Ariana was sitting at the dinner table, getting ready to eat her supper as she looked over the spell book once more."

    "She had gone along with casting the spell on MJ more as a joke than anything. She had figured if it had worked great and if it didn’t nothing lost except an afternoon."

#E  "She had gone along with casting the spell on MJ more as a joke than anything. She had figured if it had worked, great, and if it didn’t, nothing lost except an afternoon."

    "Except it had worked. And not in the way that Ariana had expected it to. She had thought a charm spell would make MJ nicer. Not some sort of sex addict."

#E  "Except, it had worked. And not in the way that Ariana had expected it to. She had thought a charm spell would make MJ nicer, not some sort of sex addict."

    "Then again, she had already been a sex addict. So maybe it was an effect that was limited to her."

    "The only way to know for certain would be to cast the charm spell on someone else."

    show bg sc502 with dissolve

    m "I’m home."

    "Ariana’s mom walked into the kitchen wearing her stewardess uniform."

    show bg sc503 with dissolve

    a "Hey mom."

    m "Hey honey. That your supper?"

    a "Pretty much."

    show bg sc504 with dissolve

    "Her mother stepped behind her giving Ariana a warm affectionate kiss on the top of her head as a greeting."

#E  "Her mother stepped behind her, giving Ariana a warm, affectionate kiss on the top of her head as a greeting."

    show bg sc505 with dissolve

    m "You really cut a lot off didn’t you?"

    a "Well, Felicia did. Said it made me look sexy."

    m "Ha, no comment."

    show bg sc507 with dissolve

    m "What’s this you’re reading?"

    show bg sc506 with dissolve

    a "Just an old book that me and Felicia found."

    m "Looks like the sort of stuff my grandma would collect."

    a "Really?"

    m "Yeah, she was really into the crystals and positive energy sort of stuff."

    "With a shrug Ariana’s mom turned and headed towards the kitchen."

    show bg sc508 with dissolve

    m "Well I’m going to eat something too."

    a "There’s plenty of bread left."

    m "Thanks, but I think I am going to have something a bit more filling. Do you want me to make you some as well?"

    a "I’m good."

    show bg sc509 with dissolve

    "Ariana couldn’t help but notice how good her mom had smelled her breasts pressed into the back of her head like that."

#E  "Ariana couldn’t help but notice how good her mom smelled, and how her breasts pressed up against the back of her head."

    "Wait. Had she been wearing perfume?"

    "Ariana frowned as she remembered what Felicia had said about her mom sleeping with someone."

    "It was true that her mom did seem to work later on some nights. Staying overnight in her flights than she had in the past."

#E  "It was true that her mom did seem to work later on some nights than she had in the past. She even stayed overnight for some of her flights."

    show bg sc510 with dissolve

    a "Hey mom. Are you by chance seeing anyone?"

    show bg sc511

    m "What?"

    show bg sc512 with dissolve

    m "What brought that on?"

    "Ariana could hear her nervous laugh as she spoke."

    show bg sc513 with dissolve

    a "No reason. Never mind."

    show bg sc514 with dissolve

    "Well that answered that question."

    "Her heart twisted at the thought of some guy fucking her mom."

    "It shouldn’t, Ariana knew. If anything, she should be happy for her mom. Or at the very least indifferent."

    "Didn’t her mom deserve to be happy?"

    "Yet the tightening in her chest still didn’t loosen no matter how much she wanted it to."

    show bg sc515 with fade

    "Later that night, her head still spinning with her conflicted feelings towards her mom, she was heading to her bedroom."

    show bg sc516 with dissolve

    "She paused when she heard MJ talking to someone in her room."

    "Wondering if maybe Darcie or Jun had decided to stay the night she peeked inside."

#E  "Wondering if maybe Darcie or Jun had decided to stay the night, she peeked inside."

    show bg sc517 with dissolve

    mj "Because she is a fucking bitch. I don’t know why you would want to fuck her when you could fuck my pussy instead."

    "Looked like she was talking on the phone to one of her boy toys."

    show bg sc518 with dissolve

    "Ariana quickly ignored MJ’s conversation, her gaze instead falling on her big round ass that was sticking up in the air."

    show bg sc519 with dissolve

    "Without really thinking, Ariana stepped inside making her way to MJ’s bed."

#E  "Without really thinking, Ariana stepped inside, making her way to MJ’s bed."

    show bg sc520 with dissolve

    "MJ didn’t say anything even as Ariana sat down next to her. Barely acknowledging that she was there at all."

#E  "MJ didn’t say anything even as Ariana sat down next to her. She barely acknowledged that she was there at all."

    "Ariana wondered if this might be a good time to test how far she could take things with MJ. With her being on the phone it might prevent her from flipping out entirely if it went bad."

#E  "Ariana wondered if this might be a good time to test how far she could take things with MJ. With her being on the phone, it might prevent her from flipping out entirely if it went bad."

    "And she could always say it was an accident if worse came to worst."

    show bg sc521 with dissolve

    "Heart pounding in her chest, Ariana reached out putting her hand on MJ’s ass, freezing as she waited for some kind of reaction."

#E  "Heart pounding in her chest, Ariana reached out and put her hand on MJ’s ass, freezing up as she waited for some kind of reaction."

    show bg sc522 with dissolve

    "But MJ just kept on talking like nothing at all had happened. Even when Ariana started giving her ass cheek a few squeezes, she didn’t care."

    a "(whisper)No way."

#E  a "(whisper) No way."

    "Ariana couldn’t help but wonder how far she could take it."

    show bg sc523 with dissolve

    "Slowly she moved her hand from MJ’s ass to between her legs, her finger rubbing the fabric of her panties, searching for her clit."

#E  "Slowly, she moved her hand from MJ’s ass to between her legs, her finger rubbing the fabric of her panties, searching for her clit."

    "MJ let out an annoyed sigh, and Ariana snatched her hand back thinking she had gone too far."

#E  "MJ let out an annoyed sigh, and Ariana snatched her hand back, thinking she had gone too far."

    show bg sc524 with dissolve

    mj "No, it’s just my little sister messing with me."

    "MJ said as she rolled on to her side, sliding off her panties and kicking them off the bed."

#E  "MJ said as she rolled onto her side, sliding off her panties and kicking them off the bed."

    show bg sc525 with dissolve

    "She then rolled back on to her stomach, her pussy now exposed. Ariana even though she saw her sister shaking her butt as if to entice her."

#E  "She then rolled back onto her stomach, her pussy now exposed. Ariana even thought she saw her sister shaking her butt, as if to entice her."

    show bg sc527 with dissolve

    "Deciding to just go for it, Ariana crouched down behind her sister, leaning in, putting her face between her sister’s ass cheeks."

    show bg sc526 with dissolve

    mj "I mean, I guess we could."

    "MJ continued her phone conversation, seemingly not caring that her sister was currently eating her out. And if how wet her pussy was getting, was rather enjoying it."

#E  "MJ continued her phone conversation, seemingly not caring that her sister was currently eating her out. And judging by how wet her pussy was getting, she was rather enjoying it."

    mj "But I sure as shit ane't paying for it."

#E  mj "But I sure as shit ain't paying for it."

    show bg sc528 with dissolve

    "Ariana slipped a hand under her though pulling MJ’s hips up. MJ complied, getting up on her knees giving Ariana easier access to her pussy as her little sister continued to eat her out."

#E  "Ariana slipped a hand under her thigh, pulling MJ’s hips up. MJ complied, getting up on her knees, and giving Ariana easier access to her pussy as her little sister continued to eat her out."

    "MJ letting out a few labored breaths between her words."

#E  "MJ let out a few labored breaths between her words."

    show bg sc529 with dissolve

    mj "No I’m not touching myself."

#E  mj "No, I’m not touching myself."

    mj "God you are so full of yourself."

    mj "No, the only person in here is my sister."

    show bg sc530 with dissolve

    "It seemed the guy she was talking to was getting a little suspicious. Not that Ariana really cared. In fact, she wondered how far she could really take this."

    show bg sc531 with dissolve

    "She knew her sister kept her sex toys in the lower drawer."

#E  "She knew her sister kept her sex toys in the bottom drawer of her dresser."

    show bg sc532 with dissolve

    "Sure enough, she found a plastic dildo. A rather large one at that. Ariana wondered if her sister’s pussy could take it all the way."

    show bg sc533 with dissolve

    "She also found a butt plug."

    "Guess her sister was kinker than she thought. Not that she was terribly surprised that her sister liked taking it up the ass."

#E  "Guess her sister was kinkier than she thought. Not that she was terribly surprised that her sister liked taking it up the ass."

    show bg sc534 with dissolve

    "The question was, how mean did she want to be to her sister."

#E  "The question was, how mean did she want to be to her sister?"

    menu:

        "Use the butt plug":

            $ anal = True

            "Now this is going to be so much fun."

            show bg sc535 with dissolve

            "Climbing back onto the bed, Ariana pulled her sister’s ass cheeks aside exposing her ripe ass whole."

#E          "Climbing back onto the bed, Ariana pulled her sister’s ass cheeks aside, exposing her ripe asshole."

            show bg sc536 with dissolve

            "Taking the plug she slowly started pushing it inside."

#E          "Taking the plug, she slowly started pushing it inside."

            show bg sc537 with dissolve

            mj "Fuck!"

            "It seemed even MJ couldn’t keep her composure when she was getting pegged in the ass."

            "Ariana wasn’t sure if she could get it all the way inside. But this was MJ’s to begin with, so surely that meant she could take this much at least."

            show bg sc538 with dissolve

            "Finally she got the plug all the way inside, the red jewel of the plug staring back at her."

            "The sight was actually a lot hotter than Ariana would have thought."

            "Though that was just the warm up. Now it was time to get to the real fun part."

            show bg sc541p with dissolve

            "Taking the dildo, Ariana pushed it inside. The plastic going in much easier, likely due to how wet MJ was."

#E          "Taking the plastic dildo, Ariana pushed it into MJ's pussy. It went inside her much easier, likely due to how wet MJ was."

        "Just use the dildo":

            show bg sc540 with dissolve

            "Raising the dildo as she slowly started pushing it into MJ’s pussy. Taking it slow as as she watched for MJ’s reaction."

#E          "She raised the dildo as she slowly started pushing it into MJ’s pussy, taking it slow as she watched for MJ’s reaction."

            show bg sc539 with dissolve

            "MJ was doing her best, but Ariana could tell that her moans were getting louder and more frequent."

    show bg sc409 with fade

    f "Hot."

    "Felicia said, once Ariana was done retailing the events with her sister."

#E  "Felicia said, once Ariana was done retelling the events with her sister."

    show bg sc401 with dissolve

    if bathdream == "sis":

        "Ariana skipped the part where she masterbated to fucking her with an actual cock."

#E      "Ariana skipped the part where she masturbated to the thought of fucking her with an actual cock."

    else:

        "She skipped over the part where she imagined herself fucking her mom with a cock."

    show bg sc403 with dissolve

    f "But she’s always the one to initiate things?"

    a "Yeah, I don’t even have to command her to or anything."

    show bg sc405 with dissolve

    f "Hmmmmm."

    f "Yeah, but that also means we don’t know yet what she would do if you did order her to."

    f "So she still might be able to say no."

    show bg sc408 with dissolve

    f "You could always ask her to come over and we could find out."

    show bg sc411 with dissolve

    a "Fuck no."

    f "Why not. It’s for science."

#E  f "Why not? It’s for science."

    a "I’m not fucking my sister in front of you. Or anyone else for that matter."

    f "Yeah, but how else are we going to know for certain that the spell is what is causing this."

#E  f "Yeah, but how else are we going to know for certain that the spell is what is causing this?"

    show bg sc407 with dissolve

    f "For all we know this could just be a coincidence."

    a "You really think it’s a coincidence that MJ fucked me the day after we cast a spell on her?"

    show bg sc410 with dissolve

    f "I mean if it was anyone but your sister than no."

#E  f "I mean, if it was anyone but your sister, then no."

    f "But let’s be honest, your sister has never exactly been picky when it come to who or even what she fucks."

#E  f "But let’s be honest, your sister has never exactly been picky when it comes to who, or even what, she fucks."

    show bg sc406 with dissolve

    f "Oh! You should see if you can get her to fuck a dog."

#E  f "Oh! You should see if you can get her to fuck a dog!"

    a "Ah, how about no, you sick freak."

#E  a "Uh, how about no, you sick freak."

    f "Come on. You got to at least admit that it’d be hot."

#E  f "Come on. You've got to at least admit that it’d be hot."

    f "Watching your bitch of a sister getting fucked like an actual bitch in heat."

    menu:

        "Yeah it would be.":

            $ bestiality = True

            show bg sc402 with dissolve

            f "See."

            a "That doesn’t mean I’m going to do it."

            f "You say that now…"

        "No it would not.":

            show bg sc404 with dissolve

            f "Fine."

            f "Be a killjoy."

    f "There. All done."

    show bg sc412 with dissolve

    "Felicia unclasped the cloth around Ariana’s neck and started shaking out the hair as Ariana reached for the hand mirror."

    show bg sc413 with dissolve

    f "So what do you think?"

    a "A bit shorter than I am used to."

    f "Sure, but it’s still sexy."

    show bg sc414 with dissolve

    a "You said that when you dyed it blue."

    f "It was sexy at the time. You just didn’t do anything with it and let it get all… ugly."

    a "Thanks."

    f "You’re very welcome."

    "Ariana rolled her eyes, not sure if Felicia was being serious or not."

    show bg sc415 with dissolve

    f "Come on. I want to show you something."

    show bg sc416 with dissolve

    a "Did you decipher more of the book?"

    f "Wouldn't you like to know?"

    show bg sc417 with dissolve

    f "Come on in. Hold on while I get the book."

    show bg sc419 with dissolve

    f "So did you give any more thought to putting the spell on your mom?"

    show bg sc418 with dissolve

    a "Not really."

    "That was a lie. Ariana couldn’t stop thinking about it honestly."

    show bg sc420 with dissolve

    f "Shame. Guess you don’t mind her fucking other guys then."

    show bg sc421 with dissolve

    a "Wait what?"

#E  a "Wait, what?"

    show bg sc422 with dissolve

    f "Oh come on. Your mom is hot and single. You don’t think guys aren’t tripping over themselves to get to her. It’s only a matter of time before one of them gets into her pants."

#E  f "Oh come on. Your mom is hot and single. You don’t think guys aren’t tripping over themselves to get to her? It’s only a matter of time before one of them gets into her pants."

    a "My mom isn’t… hasn’t dated anyone since dad."

    show bg sc423 with dissolve

    f "That you know of, you mean. Would you even know if she was?"

    "Ariana had to admit she probably wouldn’t. And now that she thought about it, her mom was wearing a lot of makeup this morning. Nothing out of the ordinary for her but also a lot unless there was someone she was trying to impress."

#E  "Ariana had to admit she probably wouldn’t. And now that she thought about it, her mom was wearing a lot of makeup this morning. Nothing too out of the ordinary for her, but it seemed excessive, unless there was someone she was trying to impress."

    show bg sc424 with dissolve

    f "So I have finished deciphering more of the book and I think I have discovered two more spells."

    show bg sc426 with dissolve

    a "You think? You mean you don’t know."

#E  a "You think? You mean you don’t know?"

    show bg sc425 with dissolve

    f "Fuck you. This book is written in three different languages and is put together more confusingly than an IKEA manual."

    a "Have you perhaps figured out who wrote it and why?"

#E  a "Have you perhaps figured out who wrote it, and why?"

    show bg sc427 with dissolve

    f "Yeah, clearly it was some horney old dude who wanted to get laid."

#E  f "Yeah. Clearly it was some horny old dude who wanted to get laid."

    show bg sc428 with dissolve

    f "Hence why the spells only work on women and all seem to all be perverted in nature."

#E  f "Hence why the spells only work on women, and they all seem to be perverted in nature."

    show bg sc429 with dissolve

    a "All the spells are?"

    show bg sc430 with dissolve

    f "Yup, the two new ones are bimbofication spell, and a fertilization spell."

#E  f "Yup. The two new ones are a bimbofication spell, and a fertilization spell."

    show bg sc433 with dissolve

    a "A bimbofication spell, really? I don’t think they had that word a thousand years ago, or whenever this book was written."

    show bg sc432 with dissolve

    f "1500s and fine, they call it a  ‘beautification’ spell."

#E  f "1500s, and fine, they call it a ‘beautification’ spell."

    f "But let’s be honest, a beautification spell that can only work on women being cast by a man means giving girls a big ass and tits."

#E  f "But let’s be honest, a beautification spell that can only work on women, being cast by a man, means giving girls a big ass and tits."

    f "i.e. a bimbofication spell."

    show bg sc438 with dissolve

    a "Aren’t you assuming just a little."

#E  a "Aren’t you assuming, just a little?"

    show bg sc434 with dissolve

    f "Really? And how is that ‘charm’ spell you cast on your sister working out for you?"

    a "Fair point."

    show bg sc439 with dissolve

    a "So what’s your plan? My sister is already a bimbo and I have no desire to make her pregnant."

    a "Unless you’ve been harboring some secret desire to be a bimbo that I don’t know about. Or to get pregnant."

#E  a "Unless you’ve been harboring some secret desire to be a bimbo that I don’t know about? Or to get pregnant?"

    show bg sc440 with dissolve

    f "It doesn’t have to be someone we know. Do you know how much people would pay us if we could turn fat people into hot chicks."

#E  f "It doesn’t have to be someone we know. Do you know how much people would pay us if we could turn fat people into hot chicks?"

    show bg sc435 with dissolve

    a "A) assuming they believe us. And B) assuming it’s permanent."

    show bg sc440 with dissolve

    f "Dude these bitches think that rocks protect them from feeling sad and their future is determined by the tilt of Uranus."

#E  f "Dude, these bitches think that rocks protect them from feeling sad, and that their future is determined by the tilt of Uranus."

    f "I don’t think it will be hard for them to be convinced that we can use magic to make them look pretty."

    f "And if it’s not permanent, even better. It just means we get repeat customers."

    f "We’ll even dress you up like a gypsy and give you a crystal ball."

    show bg sc437 with dissolve

    a "Yeah, that's going to be a hard pass."

    show bg sc441 with dissolve

    a "And you clearly can not be trusted with this anymore."

    show bg sc442 with dissolve

    f "But I’m not done translating it yet."

    a "How about you first figure out who made this and why only I can use it. Then we can discuss translating more spells."

    show bg sc443 with dissolve

    if bestiality == False:

        f "Okay, but you are still going to put the charm spell on your mom right?"

#E      f "Okay, but you are still going to put the charm spell on your mom, right?"

    else:

        f "Okay, but you are still going to make MJ fuck a dog right?"

#E      f "Okay, but you are still going to make MJ fuck a dog, right?"

    a "Bye Felicia."

    show bg sc445 with dissolve

    c "Felicia why the hell is the patio covered in hair? It's disgusting out there."

#E  c "Felicia, why the hell is the patio covered in hair? It's disgusting out there!"

    "Ariana tunred and saw Felicia's older sister storming up the stars."

#E  "Ariana turned and saw Felicia's older sister storming up the stairs."

    show bg sc446 with dissolve

    c "Oh, hey Ariana."

    show bg sc447 with dissolve

    a "Hey Cara."

    a "Your sister just gave me a haircut."

    c "Oh. Well your hair looks very pretty. And I didn't mean to imply that your hair is disgusting."

    a "Thank you. And it's fine."

    show bg sc448 with dissolve

    c "And you grab a broom and clean up your mess. I need to use the patio."

#E  c "And you, grab a broom and clean up your mess. I need to use the patio."

    show bg sc449 with dissolve

    "Ariana and Felicia stood in silnce as they watched Cara go back down the steps."

    f "We should bimbofy my sister."

    a "Nope."

    show bg sc450 with dissolve

    a "Thanks for the haircut."

    f "Boooo. Spoil sport."

    "Ariana waved at Felicia as she left."

    show bg sc451 with dissolve

    "Ariana made her way down the steps, seeing Cara in the living room stretching out her legs."

    show bg sc453 with dissolve

    "Ariana unable to stop her eyes from falling on Cara's ass."

#E  "Ariana was unable to stop her gaze from falling on Cara's ass."

    show bg sc452 with dissolve

    "Those stretches coupled with that sports outfit certianly showed off all her best parts."

    show bg sc454 with dissolve

    c "Oh, hey Ariana."

    "Cara smiled as she turned to met Ariana."

    show bg sc456 with dissolve

    c "You heading out?"

    a "Yeah."

    show bg sc455 with dissolve

    a "Got to make my escape before your sister convinces me to do something I know I'm going to regret."

    show bg sc457 with dissolve

    c "I hear you there."

    c "Belive it or not, I do think you are a good influence on her."

    a "That's a scary thought."

    show bg sc458 with dissolve

    c "Just be careful that you influence her more than she influences you."

#E  c "Just make sure that you influence her more than she influences you."

    "Cara gave Ariana a wink and a reasfuring pat on the shoulder before walking past her to the back door."

#E  "Cara gave Ariana a wink and a reassuring pat on the shoulder before walking past her to the back door."

    show bg sc219 with dissolve

    menu:

        "Think of your mother.":

            $bathdream == "mom"

            show bg sc224 with flash

            m "That’s right honey. Fill your mommy with that thick cock. Make her pussy feel good."

            "Her mom moaned as she slowly rode her cock up and down, her large sexy breasts bouncing with every thrust of her hip."

            show bg sc225 with flash

            m "Ah, that’s it. Claim my womb. Make me yours. Make me into your dirty little fuck toy."

            "Her mother’s words making her thrust into her even harder as she grew closer and closer to coming."

#E          "Her mother’s words made her thrust into her even harder, as she grew closer and closer to coming."

            show bg sc226 with flash

            m "That’s it."

            "Her mom praised as she stroked her cock."

#E          "Her mom praised her as she stroked her cock."

            m "Paint your mother’s face with your white hot seed."

            show bg sc227 with flash

            "Hearing her mother say that was just what she needed to push herself over the edge. Cumming all over her mother’s face."

#E          "Hearing her mother say that was just what she needed to push herself over the edge. She came all over her mother’s face."

            show bg sc228 with dissolve

            m "Thank  you. I feel so pretty covered in my daughter’s cum."

#E          m "Thank you. I feel so pretty covered in my daughter’s cum."

            "She happily used her finger to scoop up some of the cum on her chest and slowly licked it off savoring it."

#E          "She happily used her finger to scoop up some of the cum on her chest, and slowly licked it off, savoring it."

            m "I love the taste of my daughter’s cum. I could eat this all day and be happy."

            show bg sc221 with dissolve

            a "Fucking hell."

            "Ariana gasped, as she came in real life."

            show bg sc222 with dissolve

            a "What the hell was that?"

            "Why had she thought of her mother when she had been thinking of her sister?"

            "And why the hell had she been imagining herself with a dick?"

            "And perhaps most important of all..."

            show bg sc223 with dissolve

            "Why had that felt so good?"

        "Think of your sister.":

            $bathdream == "sis"

            show bg sc229 with flash

            mj "That’s right. I know you like it when I ride your cock like a little slut."

            "MJ said, slamming her ass down on Ariana’s cock causing her massive fake tits to bounce as she did so."

#E          "MJ said, slamming her ass down on Ariana’s cock, causing her massive fake tits to bounce as she did so."

            show bg sc230 with flash

            mj "You like the feeling of your sister’s pussy? With how deep you can go inside of me?"

            mj "It’s because my pussy has become shaped to please you. No one else can make my pussy feel this good anymore. It’s why I need my sister’s cock to fill me."

            show bg sc231 with dissolve

            mj "That’s right and no one but your sister can make this cock feel as good as I can."

#E          mj "That’s right, and nobody else can make this cock feel as good as I can."

            "MJ bragged as she sucked on Ariana’s thick cock, her long tongue expertly wrapping around the shaft so it would feel even better."

            mj "Go on cum. Cum in your big sister’s slutty mouth."

#E          mj "Go on, cum. Cum in your big sister’s slutty mouth."

            show bg sc232 with dissolve

            "And Ariana did. Unleashing a huge load down her sister’s throat."

#E          "And Ariana did, unleashing a huge load down her sister’s throat."

            show bg sc233 with dissolve

            "MJ proudly showed Ariana the cum in her mouth."

            show bg sc234 with dissolve

            "Then with a smile closed her mouth and smiled."

#E          "Then with a smile, she closed her mouth, swallowed, and grinned."

            show bg sc235 with dissolve

            mj "Delicious."

            "She said with a satisfied look."

            mj "Please. Feed me more of your delicious cum soon."

#E          mj "Please, feed me more of your delicious cum soon."

            show bg sc221 with dissolve

            a "Holly fuck."

#E          a "Holy fuck."

            "Ariana gasped, as she came in real life."

            show bg sc222 with dissolve

            a "What the hell was that?"

            "Why the hell had she imagined herself fucking MJ with an actual cock?"

            "Not a strap on but an actual real cock."

#E          "Not a strap-on, but an actual, real cock."

            "And perhaps most important of all..."

            show bg sc223 with dissolve

            "Why did that thought turn her on so much?"

    show bg sc301 with fade

    "Ariana finished her bath and stepped out heading into her room to get changed before heading over to Felicia's place."

#E  "Ariana finished her bath and headed towards her room, intending to get dressed and go over to Felicia's place."

    show bg sc302 with dissolve

    "Before she reached her room, she heard the sound of people talking out on the balcony."

#E  "But before she reached her room, she heard the sound of people talking out on the balcony."

    a "Who could that be?"

    "Her mom should have left for work by now. That should have just left her and MJ here."

    show bg sc303 with dissolve

    "Quietly, Ariana moved to the end of the hall and peaked around to see what was going on."

#E  "Quietly, Ariana moved to the end of the hall, and peeked around the corner to see what was going on."

    show bg sc306 with dissolve

    "There on the porch was MJ with two of her other friends Darcie and Jun in bikinis, sun tanning themselves."

#E  "There on the porch was MJ, with two of her other friends Darcie and Jun, in bikinis and sun tanning themselves."

    "Well, Ariana wasn’t sure if friends was the right word to use to describe the three."

    show bg sc337 with dissolve

    "Jun and MJ particularly seemed to hate each other. Ariana could not remember a time that they had exchanged words and hadn't insulted each other."

    show bg sc336 with dissolve

    "Darcie wasn't so viscous, if anything she seemed to find enjoyment in watching the two go at each other but Ariana knew from experience she could be just as cold and mean as the others. If not more so."

#E  "Darcie wasn't so vicious. If anything, she seemed to find enjoyment in watching the two go at each other. But Ariana knew from experience she could be just as cold and mean as the others, if not more so."

    show bg sc304 with dissolve

    j "Hey, MJ. I’m thirsty. Go get me a beer."

#E  j "Hey MJ, I’m thirsty. Go get me a beer."

    mj "Do I look like your servant, bitch. Go get it yourself."

#E  mj "Do I look like your servant, bitch? Go get it yourself."

    j "Oh, you're too good to serve a few drinks to your guests? What a fucking princess."

    show bg sc338 with dissolve

    d "Cut her some slack. The only thing MJ knows how to serve is a man's cock."

    show bg sc305 with dissolve

    mj "You know what? Fuck you both."

    show bg sc307 with dissolve

    "MJ practically slammed the patio door behind her as she stormed into the kitchen."

    mj "Fucking cunt bitches."

    show bg sc309 with dissolve

    a "That a curse or a desire?"

#E  a "That a curse, or a desire?"

    show bg sc308 with dissolve

    mj "Wouldn’t you like to know."

    show bg sc310 with dissolve

    a "You know mom's going to be pissed when she finds out you've had friends over and are drinking her beer."

#E  a "You know mom's going to be pissed when she finds out you had friends over and drank her beer."

    show bg sc311 with dissolve

    mj "Well, what mom doesn't know can't piss her off."

    "When Ariana didn't respond MJ let out a defeated breath."

#E  "When Ariana didn't respond, MJ let out a defeated breath."

    show bg sc312 with dissolve

    mj "Alright. Fine."

    "MJ set the bottles down on the counter before she started to make her way back around towards Ariana."

    show bg sc314 with dissolve

    mj "What if I eat your pussy?"

    show bg sc313 with dissolve

    a "Seriously?"

    show bg sc315 with dissolve

    mj "Oh, don't give me that. I know what I need to do to keep you from telling on me to mom."

#E  mj "Oh, don't give me that. I know what I need to do to keep you from telling mom."

    show bg sc317 with dissolve

    mj "And we both know how good I am at pleasing you."

    show bg sc316 with dissolve

    a "Damn, you really are a massive slut."

    show bg sc319 with dissolve

    "MJ didn’t even bother to argue, pulling up Ariana’s towel and leaning in between her legs."

    show bg sc320 with dissolve

    "MJ stuck her tongue out and licked her pussy, swirling around her clit before plunging into her pussy."

    show bg sc321 with dissolve

    "Ariana gasped at the feel of MJ's tongue on her pussy, her body trembling as MJ's tongue fucked her."

    show bg sc318 with dissolve

    "MJ slowly working long tongue up and down Ariana's pussy. Her tongue ring doing numbers every time it rubbed against Ariana's clit."

#E  "MJ slowly worked her long tongue up and down Ariana's pussy. Her tongue ring did wonders every time it rubbed against Ariana's clit."

    show bg sc323 with dissolve

    d "Dude. Where the fuck are you with those beers?"

    "Ariana froze. She had completely forgotten about Darcie and Jun."

    show bg sc322 with dissolve

    d "Oh. Hey Ariana."

    show bg sc324 with dissolve

    "Ariana quickly spun around, trying to act casual as she leaned over the counter to better hide what she had been doing."

    a "Hey, Darcie. How’s it going?"

    show bg sc325 with dissolve

    d "Have you seen your sister by any chance?"

    show bg sc327 with dissolve

    a "Who MJ?"

    "Ariana did her best to keep her voice flat and even as her sister continued to lick her pussy from under the counter."

#E  "Ariana did her best to keep her voice flat and even, as her sister continued to lick her pussy from under the counter."

    show bg sc326 with dissolve

    a "I think she said something about going to the bathroom now that I was out."

    show bg sc328 with dissolve

    d "Well looks like she got us the beers at least."

#E  d "Well, looks like she got us the beers at least."

    d "She didn't spit in these or anything right?"

#E  d "She didn't spit in these or anything, right?"

    show bg sc329 with dissolve

    a "Nuh-uh."

    "Was all Ariana could say while desperately hoping Darcie didn’t notice her sister currently pleasuring her under the counter."

    show bg sc332 with dissolve

    d "Good enough for me. Thanks."

    show bg sc330 with dissolve

    "Great, now if you could leave before my sister makes me cum."

    show bg sc331 with dissolve

    d "By the way, Loving that outfit."

#E  d "By the way, loving that outfit."

    d "Really shows off your best qualities."

    show bg sc335 with dissolve

    "Darcie didn’t say anything more as she headed back outside."

    j "Finally. Did you get the beer?"

    d "Yeah, I got your fucking beer, you nagging bitch."

    show bg sc334 with dissolve

    mj "That was fun."

    "MJ teased, licking her lips."

    show bg sc333 with dissolve

    a "Yeah, you really seemed to be enjoying yourself."

    mj "Oh don’t give me that. You were clearly enjoying it yourself given how hard you came just now."

    mj "Got a bit of an exabitionist fetish do we?"

#E  mj "Got a bit of an exhibitionist fetish, do we?"

    a "Look who’s talking. I take it that wasn’t your first time pleasuring someone from under a counter."

    show bg sc339 with dissolve

    mj "Wouldn’t you like to know."

    "MJ smiled as she headed for the patio."

    a "Aren't you forgetting something?"

    mj "Nope."

    show bg sc151 with dissolve

    mj "Alright, you big baby. Since I'm such a nice big sister and you are doing such a good job eating my pussy, I guess I can give your tasty pussy a little more loving."

    show bg sc148 with dissolve

    "MJ leaned in gliding her tongue along Ariana's pussy. Starting with her clit before making its way down."

#E  "MJ leaned in, gliding her tongue along Ariana's pussy. She started with her clit before making her way down."

    show bg sc149 with dissolve

    "Ariana did much the same to MJ's pussy, though she was clearly not as skilled at it as her sister was."

    "Still, she could hear her sister give soft moans of pleasure and that was indication enough that she was on the right track in finding her pleasure spots."

#E  "Still, she could hear her sister give soft moans of pleasure, and that was indication enough that she was on the right track in finding her pleasure spots."

    show bg sc150 with fade

    "The girls continued to 69 each other for some time, the smell of sex filling the room."

    show bg sc152 with fade

    "And their fun did not end even after their mom had finally left."

    "Now free to get a little more wild without having to fear being discovered they began scissoring each other."

#E  "Now free to get a little more wild without having to fear being discovered, they began scissoring each other."

    show bg sc153 with dissolve

    mj "That right. Show your sister how your titties bounce as I fuck you."

#E  mj "That's right. Show your sister how your titties bounce as I fuck you."

    "MJ grunted as she thrust her hips against her sister's. Both of them letting out short and loud moans with each thrust."

#E  "MJ grunted as she thrust her hips against her sister's. Both of them let out short, loud moans with each thrust."

    show bg sc154 with fade

    "Some time later, the two of them lay exhausted on the bed, panting for breath."

    show bg sc155 with dissolve

    a "So that just happened."

    mj "Hell yeah it did."

    show bg sc157 with dissolve

    mj "Thanks for not ratting me out to mom."

    show bg sc156 with dissolve

    mj "Which I guess now that she's gone I can leave."

    show bg sc158 with dissolve

    mj "This was fun but I'm gonna go and take a shower now."

    "MJ headed for the door naked, not even bothering to pick up her clothes as she left."

    show bg sc159 with dissolve

    "Leaving Ariana alone staring up at the ceiling as she tried to come to terms with what just happened."

#E  "Ariana was left alone, staring up at the ceiling as she tried to come to terms with what just happened."

    show bg sc160 with dissolve

    "..."

    a "Felicia."

    a "You are not going to believe this but it actually worked."

#E  a "You are not going to believe this, but it actually worked."

    f "You're kidding. You mean your sister actually came on to you?"

    show bg sc161 with dissolve

    a "She did a lot more than that. We just had sex for the past..."

    show bg sc162 with dissolve

    "Ariana quickly checked the time on her phone."

    show bg sc161 with dissolve

    a "Three hours."

#E  a "...three hours."

    f "No fucking way. Did you take any pics?"

    show bg sc164 with dissolve

    a "No you fucking perv."

#E  a "No, you fucking perv."

    f "Lame."

    f "Alright look.  We need to see how far we can take this. You know what that means right?"

#E  f "Alright look, we need to see how far we can take this. You know what that means, right?"

    show bg sc163 with dissolve

    "Ariana did, and she wasn’t sure how comfortable she was with it. Making her slutty annoying sister fall in love with her was one thing. But her mom?"

#E  "Ariana did, and she wasn’t sure how comfortable she was with it. Making her slutty, annoying sister fall in love with her was one thing. But her mom?"

    a "I’ll have to think about it"

#E  a "I’ll have to think about it."

    f "Don’t you dare. How can you chicken out now of all times?"

    a "Would you be okay sleeping with your mom?"

    f "Fuck no. My mom is a fucking hag. But your mom is smoking hot. I would fuck her and I’m not even a lesbian."

    show bg sc167 with dissolve

    a "Look, I didn’t say I wouldn’t do it. Just that I will have to think about it.  I’m going to see how MJ reacts first."

#E  a "Look, I didn’t say I wouldn’t do it. Just that I will have to think about it. I’m going to see how MJ reacts first."

    a "I’m already going to be in trouble if this thing wears off in a few hours and MJ starts freaking out. What do you think will happen if that happens with my mom?"

    f "*UGH* Fine."

    f "But I still expect you to give me all the hot and sweaty details later."

    a "Yeah, not happening."

    show bg sc165 with dissolve

    "Ariana hung up and fell back into bed."

    "She stared up at the ceiling her mind racing as she tried to figure out what her life was about to come to."

#E  "She stared up at the ceiling, her mind racing, as she tried to figure out what her life was about to come to..."

    show bg sc166 with dissolve

    "While also remembering how soft her sisters lips were."

#E  "...While also remembering how soft her sister's lips were."

    hide bg with fade

    show bg sc201 with fade:

        zoom 1.4

    "The next morning Ariana shuffled into the kitchen to see her mom sitting at the counter, drinking her morning coffee while reading something on her tablet."

#E  "The next morning, Ariana shuffled into the kitchen, and saw her mom sitting at the counter, drinking her morning coffee while reading something on her tablet."

    show bg sc203 with dissolve

    a "Morning, mom."

    "Ariana greeted as she walked towards the cabinet to pull out a bowl and box of cereal."

#E  "Ariana greeted her as she walked towards the cabinet to pull out a bowl and a box of cereal."

    show bg sc204 with dissolve

    m "Look who finally decided to come out of her room."

    m "You have any plans for today?"

    a "Not really. I'm going over to Felicia's so she can cut my hair."

    m "Oh well that's nice of her."

#E  m "Oh, well that's nice of her."

    show bg sc205 with dissolve

    a "It's the least she can do since she was the one who convinced me to dye it in the first place."

    a "So what did you want with MJ yesterday?"

    show bg sc206 with dissolve

    m "Oh, that. Nothing really just needed to talk to her about something."

#E  m "Oh, that. Nothing really, I just needed to talk to her about something."

    "Her mom sighing giving Ariana a clear view of her mother's cleavage."

#E  "Her mom sighed, giving Ariana a clear view of her cleavage."

    show bg sc207 with dissolve

    "And her succulent looking breasts that were being held in by such a thin piece of fabric."

#E  "Her succulent looking breasts were being held in by such a thin piece of fabric."

    show bg sc209 with dissolve

    m "You okay, honey?"

    show bg sc210 with dissolve

    a "What?"

    show bg sc211 with dissolve

    a "Oh yeah. Sorry still a little tired, must of spaced out there for a moment."

#E  a "Oh yeah. Sorry, still a little tired, must have spaced out there for a moment."

    "She hoped her mom believed that."

    show bg sc204 with dissolve

    m "You're supposed to be too young to be doing that."

    m "And on that note, I need to go get ready for work."

    show bg sc212 with dissolve

    m "Try to stay out of trouble."

    "Her mom got up and gave her daughter a quick kiss on the cheek as she passed by on her way to put her mug in the sink."

#E  "She got up and gave her daughter a quick kiss on the cheek as she passed by on her way to put her mug in the sink."

    show bg sc213 with dissolve

    "As she leaned forward her robe coming just ever so slightly undone that Ariana catch a brief glimpse of her mom's nipple."

#E  "As she leaned forward, her robe came just ever-so-slightly undone, and Ariana caught a brief glimpse of her mom's nipple."

    show bg sc214 with dissolve

    a "You too mom."

    "Ariana swallowed, unable to look away."

    show bg sc215 with dissolve

    m "See you tonight."

    "Her mom said casually as she walked away."

    a "Yeah. See you."

    show bg sc208 with dissolve

    a "Fucking hell."

    a "What is wrong with me?"

    "Felicia had really done a number on her talking about having sex with her mom. Now her head was filled with these... thoughts."

#E  "Felicia had really done a number on her by talking about having sex with her mom. Now her head was filled with these... thoughts."

    a "I need to go soak my head."

    show bg sc216 with fade

    "Ariana let out a long calming breath as she sat in the tub, letting her body relax in the hot water."

    show bg sc217 with dissolve

    a "God, what is wrong with me?"

    "Had she really gotten turned on by the sight of her own mother?"

    "And what’s more, why didn’t she feel bad about it?"

    "Should she feel bad about it?"

    "She had already crossed the line with her sister. Though she hadn’t made MJ do anything she wasn’t already doing, she just made her do it with Ariana."

    show bg sc218 with dissolve

    a "It was hot though."

    "Ariana could not help but smile as she thought back to yesterday. How her sister had so willingly and eagerly given herself over."

    "Even now her body craved for that touch again. Their bodies entwined as their moans of pleasure filled the room as they gave themselves over to the throws of ecstasy."

#E  "Even now, her body craved that touch again. Their bodies entwined, their moans of pleasure filling the room as they gave themselves over to the throes of ecstasy..."

    show bg sc220 with dissolve

    "Ariana rubbed herself as she let her mind run wild with erotic thoughts."

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define m = Character ("Mom", color= "#00c5e3")

define f = Character ("Felicia", color= "#ff4d00")

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define j = Character ("Jun", color= "#ff8cd9")

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define anal = False

define bdsm = False

# The game starts here.

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    show bg sc101 with fade:

        zoom 1.4

    "It was mid afternoon but Ariana was still laying in bed. Propped up on a pillow against her bedframe, she let her thumb scroll across the screen of her phone as she read her ebook."

    show bg sc105 with dissolve

    "The door to Ariana's room burst open and her older sister rushed inside, closing the door and pressing her back against it."

    show bg sc104 with dissolve

    "Ariana would say her sister was dressed like she was heading to a club, but in all honesty, that was just what how she normally dressed."

#E  "Ariana would say her sister was dressed like she was heading to a club, but in all honesty, that was just how she normally dressed."

    show bg sc106 with dissolve

    a "What do you want MJ?"

    show bg sc107 with dissolve

    "MJ only responded with a hushed finger to her lips."

    show bg sc102 with dissolve

    "She then turned, listening behind the door."

    show bg sc106 with dissolve

    "Ariana let out a sigh, ignoring her sister and whatever antics she was up to today."

    show bg sc109 with dissolve

    mj "Move over."

    "MJ said as she began crawling on to Ariana's bed."

    a "Hell, no. Get off."

    show bg sc108 with dissolve

    mj "Shhhhhhh."

    mj "Keep your voice down."

    a "Why? What did you do this time?"

    show bg sc116 with dissolve

    mj "Just a little misunderstanding with mom."

    a "Yeah right."

    "If she had to guess, MJ probably stole money from mom’s purse again. That or she put a dent in her car or forged her name on a document."

    "Actually, there were too many things she could have done for Ariana to count."

    "But before Ariana could argue with her sister, there was soft a knock at door."

#E  "But before Ariana could argue with her sister, there was a soft knock at the door."

    show bg sc110 with dissolve

    m "Ariana? You in there?"

    show bg sc111 with dissolve

    a "Yeah mom."

    show bg sc110 with dissolve

    m "Have you seen your sister?"

    show bg sc112 with dissolve

    "Ariana looked over at her older sister, hands pressed together begging her not to rat her out."

    show bg sc113 with dissolve

    a "*SIGH*"

    a "No, I haven't seen her all day."

    show bg sc114 with dissolve

    "MJ bounced with joy and excitedly as she dove in pressing her face against her sisters as she quietly thanked her."

#E  "MJ bounced with joy and excitement as she dove in, pressing her face against her sister's and quietly thanking her."

    m "Damn, it. Where did that child run off to."

#E  m "Damn it. Where did that child run off to?"

    "Ariana knew her mom was forcing herself in using polite language when referring to her oldest child."

    m "Alright. Don't stay in there all day."

    a "I won't."

    "Ariana could hear her mom walking away from the door and a few seconds later heard the sound of the TV turning on."

    show bg sc115 with dissolve

    a "There, I covered for you. Now get out."

    mj "No I can’t. Mom will see me if I try to leave right now. She’s going to go to work in a few hours. So just let me stay here until then."

    a "Seriously?"

    show bg sc117 with dissolve

    "But Mj cut off her protests by putting a finger to her lips shushing Ariana to be quite pointing at the door."

#E  "But MJ cut off her protests by putting a finger to her lips, shushing Ariana to be quiet, and pointing at the door."

    mj "I promise to make it up to you."

    show bg sc118 with dissolve

    a "As if I haven't heard that one before."

    "But even as Ariana protested, MJ was leaning forward, a hand gently caressing Ariana’s stomach with her finger."

#E  "But even as Ariana protested, MJ was leaning forward, and gently caressing Ariana’s stomach with her finger."

    mj "Please."

    mj "I promise you won't regret it."

    show bg sc119 with dissolve

    "Her hand with each stroke made it’s way lower and lower. Without thinking Ariana parted her legs enough so her sister’s hand could move between them. Her fingers gently rubbing though Ariana’s panties."

#E  "With each stroke, her hand made its way lower and lower. Without thinking, Ariana parted her legs enough so her sister’s hand could move between them. Her fingers began gently rubbing though Ariana’s panties."

    a "Careful. I might start getting ideas if you keep that up."

    show bg sc120 with dissolve

    mj "And what ideas might those be?"

    "Her one hand never stopping her stoking, MJ reached up with her other hand pulling down her pink tube top revealing her breasts."

#E  "Her one hand continuing her stroking, MJ reached up with her other hand, pulling down her pink tube top and revealing her breasts."

    "Ariana did her best to keep her composure but her heart leapt in her chest and started racing at the sight of her sister's bare tits."

#E  "Ariana did her best to keep her composure, but her heart leapt in her chest and started racing at the sight of her sister's bare tits."

    mj "Go on. I know you want to touch them."

    "Despite her better judgment, and half thinking this might still be some sort of mean prank her sister was pulling, Ariana slowly reached out a hand."

    show bg sc121 with dissolve

    "They were softer than she had expected, being fake. It would seem that whoever did them had done a good job. She could only barely feel the surgical scar on the bottom and wondered if she would be able to do even that in a few months."

    mj "That's right. Touch your sister's titties."

    show bg sc123 with dissolve

    "MJ skillfully slipped off Ariana's panties and started playing with her wet pussy with a gentle finger running up and down her folds."

#E  "MJ skillfully slipped off Ariana's panties and started playing with her wet pussy, with a gentle finger running up and down her folds."

    show bg sc122 with dissolve

    "As she did so, she leaned in, kissing her sister with a hot passion."

    "Without even thinking, Ariana reached up and began to unbutton her shirt."

    show bg sc123 with dissolve

    "With the last button undone, her breasts came free. Leaving her body fully exposed to her older sister."

#E  "With the last button undone, her breasts came free, leaving her body fully exposed to her older sister."

    show bg sc124 with dissolve

    mj "Now then. Let's move this along shall we."

#E  mj "Now then. Let's move this along, shall we?"

    "MJ said, straddling her sister's hips."

    show bg sc126 with dissolve

    a "What has gotten into you?"

    mj "What? I’m horney, you’re horney. So what’s the problem?"

#E  mj "What? I’m horny, you’re horny. So what’s the problem?"

    show bg sc127 with dissolve

    "MJ opened her mouth, and Ariana obediently moved her thumb to her lips."

    "MJ never stopped looking at her sister as she took the thumb into her mouth and began sucking on it. Her tongue lightly swirling around the tip of Ariana’s finger."

#E  "MJ never stopped looking at her sister as she took the thumb into her mouth and began sucking on it. Her tongue lightly swirled around the tip of Ariana’s finger."

    a "Don’t you have a boyfriend?"

    show bg sc128 with dissolve

    mj "Several. What's your point?"

    "MJ all but laughed as she slipped off her top, squeezing her breasts together."

    show bg sc129 with dissolve

    "Ariana couldn't help but be transfixed by the site of her sister's massive fake tits just inches from her face."

#E  "Ariana couldn't help but be transfixed by the sight of her sister's massive fake tits just inches from her face."

    a "Well when you put it like that, who am I to argue?"

    show bg sc130 with dissolve

    "Ariana dove in, burring her face between her sister's massive breasts. Kissing the insides of her cleavage."

#E  "Ariana dove in, burying her face between her sister's massive breasts, and kissing the insides of her cleavage."

    "Her sister let out small breath of enjoyment as she pulled her sister in closer."

#E  "Her sister let out a small breath of enjoyment as she pulled Ariana in closer."

    show bg sc131 with dissolve

    "Without thinking, Ariana gave her sister's ass a firm smack."

    show bg sc132 with dissolve

    "MJ didn't seem to mind. Letting out a soft grunt of pleasure."

#E  "MJ didn't seem to mind. She even let out a soft grunt of pleasure."

    show bg sc134 with dissolve

    mj "Now then."

    "MJ slowly let Ariana fall back down as she began sliding down her body."

    "Her hard nipples gently rubbing against Ariana's pussy as she talked."

#E  "Her hard nipples gently rubbed against Ariana's pussy as she talked."

    show bg sc133 with dissolve

    mj "I think it's time I uphold my end of the bargain."

    "Ariana could only swallow in anticipation at what that long tongue and tongue ring would feel like."

    show bg sc135 with dissolve

    "MJ lifted her sisters hips up into the air as she burred her face between her sister's thighs."

#E  "MJ lifted her sister's hips up into the air as she buried her face between her thighs."

    show bg sc136 with dissolve

    "The feeling of her sister, sucking on her pussy, as her tongue pushed it’s way inside of her. The tongue ring that Ariana always thought was obnoxious hitting all the places she normally couldn’t get."

#E  "She could feel her sister sucking on her pussy, as her tongue pushed its way inside of her. The tongue ring that Ariana always thought was obnoxious, was hitting all the places she normally couldn’t get."

    show bg sc138 with dissolve

    mj "Tasty. Not to mention wet."

    mj "You really must have been horney if your sister can turn you on this much."

#E  mj "You really must have been horny if your sister can turn you on this much."

    show bg sc137 with dissolve

    "Ariana didn’t dare say that it was likely because it was her sister doing it that it was turning her on this much."

    "Instead she just sunk deeper into bed, doing her best to keep her voice down even as her sister swirled her tongue inside her pussy."

    show bg sc139 with dissolve

    a "Fuck."

    "Ariana gasped. Ridding the aftershock of the amazing orgasim she had just experienced."

#E  "Ariana gasped, riding the aftershock of the amazing orgasm she had just experienced."

    mj "Don't quit on me yet. We still got a few hours before mom leaves."

    show bg sc140 with dissolve

    mj "And I think it only fair that you return the favor."

    "Mj all but shoved her bare pussy in Ariana's face."

#E  "MJ all but shoved her bare pussy in Ariana's face."

    show bg sc142 with dissolve

    "Ariana responded in king grabbing her sister's thighs and began licking at her wet pussy."

#E  "Ariana responded in kind, grabbing her sister's thighs and licking at her wet pussy."

    "An additional erotic moan coming from MJ every time Ariana's tongue licked the her sister's pierced clit."

#E  "An erotic moan came from MJ every time Ariana's tongue licked her sister's pierced clit."

    show bg sc141 with dissolve

    mj "That's it little sis. Lick your big sister's slutty wet pussy."

    "MJ chuckled as she playfully bounced her hips against Ariana's face."

    show bg sc146 with dissolve

    mj "Now what do we have here?"

    "MJ reached behind her, letting her hand fall on Ariana's still wet pussy."

    show bg sc144 with dissolve

    mj "Looks like this thing isn't completely satisfied yet."

    "MJ teased Ariana's pussy with her finger but stopping short before putting it in."

#E  "MJ teased Ariana's pussy with her finger, but stopped short before putting it in."

    show bg sc147 with dissolve

    "Ariana didn't say anything except let out a soft wanting moan as she continued to taste her sister's sweet pussy. Feeling the juices run into her open mouth."

#E  "Ariana didn't say anything. She just let out a soft, wanting moan as she continued to taste her sister's sweet pussy, its juices running into her open mouth."

I took the liberty of doing a proofreading/editing pass on the base script.rpy file (Chapter 1? I'm pretty sure that's the contents of the demo basically?) and wanted to share it here with you.

I left the original lines alone, and just added extra comment lines that start with #E which are my suggested re-writes and edits of the line immediately above it.

I had to break it up into multiple comments because of Itch.io's character limits.

If this is something you'd be interested in pursuing further, or you want me to send over the full text file instead of using the separated comments below, let me know.

On closer inspection, it seems Mediafire has a max 2GB file size limit for free accounts, so that might not be viable.

Pixeldrain (https://pixeldrain.com/) is another service I have seen other AVN devs use as an alternative to Google and Mega, and they allow up to 20GB files, no account required.

I have downloaded successfully from them in the past, so that might be an option you could look into at least for public releases.

I'd really like to play this, but the downloads keep failing.

I gave up trying to get the file from Mega after a handful of attempts (their service has really gone downhill lately for me in general) and I've tried over a dozen times to download it from Google, but it fails prematurely every time.

(EDIT 4/09/2024: See my reply comment.)

Any chance you can upload to MediaFire as an alternative? (https://www.mediafire.com/)

They're very reliable and have been around forever. I never have any trouble using their service for downloads. Even really large files download perfectly on the first attempt for me.

Thank you for another update, and for always including alternate download locations for mediafire in the related patreon post.

Mega seems to have gone downhill for me anymore. It's not just an issue for your game, but rather anything I try to download from Mega over 1GB or so fails mid-download at various points, and after enough failed attempts, I get their "quota exceeded, come back in 24 hours" message.

Mediafire on the other hand, is still very reliable, and works well for me without any issues even for larger downloads, so I'm grateful you make that an option too.

I would like to offer an android version at a future date, and I know a lot of people play on mobile, but for now the main story will remain PC only.

As for the browser version, unfortunately Itch.io does not allow paid software for the web version, so the demo version is the best I'll be able to do for that.

I'm having issues with both of these too unfortunately.

Would it be possible to try a multi-part, split archive approach? I think the main issue for me is that the file is just too large to get in one shot without failing on either hosting service.

It would be one way to work around the Itch file size limits to be able to host files directly, or make the downloads on Mega/Google more likely to complete successfully by breaking it into multiple smaller files.

7-zip (https://7-zip.org/) is one free cross platform software option that can handle creating split archives in multiple parts, as well as combining them back together.

I just put out minor update 1a based on your feedback, and it should be a little easier to see and read on mobile devices. Larger font sizes throughout the presentation, and the longer text lines have been broken up into multiple lines instead. Thanks again for the suggestions!

If I drew it myself, it would be stick figure art. Bad stick figures at that. Glad you enjoyed it though, and thanks for the feedback!

Overdoll (https://overdoll.com/creators) (Help Page: https://overdoll.com/help) seems promising for digital artists, and I assume it could work for game creators as well, but it is currently invite-only, so I'm not sure it's quite ready for widespread adoption just yet. You could give it a try though and see if they allow you onto the platform? Their ToS and Community Guidelines both seem pretty reasonable and accepting. They apparently use Paxum (https://www.paxum.com/) for payment processing.

If it fully opens its doors someday to public registration, it may be a very viable option in the future, as there are no upfront costs for creators to use their platform, and they only take a fee of sales instead. For now though, it may just be like you mentioned of going with a payment processor that allows adult content, even if they are not as well integrated online.

It's a strange situation really. There needs to be a payment processor that's okay with taking "high risk" adult content related payments and dealing with the high rate of chargebacks etc. but that's also well integrated into various online platforms right next to Paypal, Stripe, and so on, to make it as easy as possible for people to choose it on the more popular sites and services. I'm sure it's all more complicated than I understand though, easier said than done.

From what I can tell, it seems many other creators impacted by this have moved to either PIxiv Fanbox, SubscribeStar, or both.

I would imagine SubscribeStar to be the easiest to transition to from Patreon, as it is the most similar, and they are okay with NSFW content generally. I'm not sure what their stance is on the AB/DL theme in particular though.

The crux of the issue isn't necessarily Patreon or similar sites, but rather the banks, payment processors, and so on, which have the strict policies in place of what they will and won't accept.

These entities hold funding hostage, even from the big name sites like Patreon, if they don't play by their rules. And in terms of adult content, such rules are often prudish, outdated, and discriminatory.

Meant to mention this weeks ago when I first checked it out, but I really enjoyed Ezri's new relationship level 5 content, more than I was expecting to. I feel like it has helped her become a more interesting character than before as a result of the related scenes. I also appreciated the inclusion of some of the side characters too.

Just figured I would confirm for you on this question:

Q: If I paid $10 or more in the past, will I have access to this early release?

I did donate $10 here on Itch.io back in February, and am able to access the new 0.57 early release downloads as intended. Thanks again for that!

On a related tangent...

Sadly I can't think of a better way for early access downloads either. It's pretty inconvenient having to create a new itch.io page every month and direct people to make a new purchase on it.

Then you have to delete that page (or at least set it to Draft status so it isn't publicly facing) and replace it with a new one every month, so people don't accidentally get the wrong link and pay for the new public version.

I wish Itch.io offered a monthly support option (maybe on an account-wide basis rather than single game page?) that would grant access to specific supporters-only content. It would make these kinds of ideas a lot easier to implement. Who knows, perhaps someday they will.

Very helpful info. I actually missed the phone guide completely, I think I checked it at the very start of playing for basic help stuff, and then forgot it mentioned hints! No wonder I missed the peeking on you scenes, it makes sense now. I agree it's good they'll be uncommon and not overdone. Maybe the rate will be just right once all of them are implemented. Thanks again for all that, looking forward to future updates!

I definitely enjoyed the content in the game! I played through till a little after day 50 and I believe I at least saw all the major relationship progression content that's available. Quite a lot more was packed in there than I imagined!

I'm sure there are some minor scenes (and maybe even a character or two) that I missed, and I didn't try both physics and art paths, but that's okay, it'll leave more to enjoy for a future version play through.

I did have some questions about allowing other girls to peek. I never seemed to get that to actually trigger. After unlocking the option with a number of the girls, it simply didn't seem to ever happen when I tried using the appropriate options from the bedroom, regardless of the time of day, or making sure said characters were at the dorm.

Is it possible I unlocked them too late in the game, and missed the opportunities to see those interactions? Is the content still in development and isn't implemented yet perhaps? Or is it just a random chance and I had extremely poor luck?

It just seems like perhaps I was missing something in order to trigger those scenes, especially once multiple girls had been given permission to peek, and still none seemed to come around.

Ah, interesting! I have heard of that program before, but haven't checked into it. Not familiar with the other titles you listed either, but I'll look into those too!

Hopefully the issues were just really unusual temporary problems on my end, but just in case they weren't, I wanted to mention it. I know how it is sometimes when things can be not working like expected and just nobody brings it up, just assuming others are already aware.

At any rate, thanks again!

I'm only just getting started playing this, having found it recently, but really appreciate what you've created here from what I've seen so far!

I see it's made in Ren'Py, but I'm curious what software you're using for the 3D models and background scenes, and the animation? If you don't mind sharing that is. If you would rather not, I understand perfectly there may be reasons to keep that information under wraps.

On another note, I wanted to bring something to your attention about the download for v0.55. I tried 3 or 4 times to download the Windows/PC release version from here, and though it appeared to work correctly and download fully, when I went to open the actual zip file, it was corrupted and would not load or extract like normal.

I ended up going to your Patreon page and finding the alternative download links post with sources from Mega.nz and Google Drive. I tried the zip file from Mega.nz and it worked perfectly on the first try, just like you would expect the normal experience to be.

It's possible it could have been an issue with my internet, but considering it failed on multiple attempts with the itch.io upload, and worked fine on the mega.nz one, you may just want to double check the zip file here, just in case others might be having issues too.

In any case, thank you for creating this wonderful work. It's very refreshing and enjoyable just from what I've seen of it thus far, and I look forward to seeing more of what the game has to offer as I get better acquainted with it.

It's okay. Just run with it :)

(The anxious mind is a strange place to live.)

Thank you for all the amazing love, care, passion, and time you have put into this project. May you continue to see great success as development progresses!

I just wanted to offer some words of encouragement and appreciation for all you and your team have accomplished. It can be easy to forget at times, but you and your team are paving the way for others to follow in your footsteps, and creating something that brings enjoyment to many. Thank you for all that you are, and all that you do.

Thanks for taking the time to reply. Please be more gentle and supportive of yourself. You have nothing to apologize for.

Professionally made games do not guarantee an enjoyable experience. If anything, I'm of the opinion that it is the indie game space that carries the passion and creativity of projects and ideas forward for video games more often than not these days.

This is a nice game. I enjoyed the writing and the art, I appreciated the inclusion of multiple paths/routes to play through, and the characters were interesting enough that I wanted to learn more about them both. After seeing all there was to see, I was just left hoping the stories would be continued someday, but even if not they reached a nice point of progression as it stands. It is my hope that more games like this may exist in the future, especially within this genre as they are few.

It's made all the more impressive knowing how short the usual game jam development cycles tend to be that you managed to provide this much content.

Thank you again to you and your collaborator(s) for making this game possible and freely sharing it with everyone.

I know this game came out quite some time ago now, but I just wanted to take a moment to say thank you for sharing your creation with everyone. It is a unique and fun experience and I appreciate that it exists.

I know this game released a few years ago now, but I'd just like to say that I really enjoyed what was here, and appreciate all the love, care, and passion that must have gone into putting it together. Thank you for creating and sharing this with everyone.