The graphics have potential, although they could be improved by adding some simple details so that the scenario doesn't feel so empty. It would also benefit from working on the interface a bit so that the art looks more coherent. The narrative is good and easy to follow, the story is interesting although it felt a bit short to me, perhaps it could be extended a bit. Overall, I enjoyed it and I think it has potential and could improve with some touch-ups. Good job! :)