Although I'm not a big fan of fantasy, I like this one. The world seems consistent and interesting. I don't really have much to say since I'm a beginner. Great job :)
Thanks for taking the time to review! I play a lot of it but don't like writing fantasy just because the genre has been so over done. But if I stumble across something that sounds interesting, or, in this case, allows me to kill a bunch of fantasy tropes.... so down mwuhahaha!