This is so cute and charming! The art for the backgrounds is lovely, and the character designs are all really nice and visually interesting! The bookshop keeper is very intriguing, I'm definitely interested to learn more about their deal in further chapters. The music was also very pretty, and helped set the scenes very well. You did a really great job creating an immersive experience, with the imagery and dialogue really helping to get into the mindset of Louise. It felt like a lovely mix of a Ghibli movie and an old English novel. I'm definitely excited to see more of it when you have the chance to continue, but this was also lovely on its own!