Hi there!
Thanks a bunch for giving CH another chance!
I'm aware of the early game being rather slow and even somewhat boring. I've learned a lot since then, both in terms of writing and the visuals, as noticeable in the later stages of the game.
MC's monologuing is indeed a bit too prominent in the early game, as you said. I have since reduced that and limited his thoughts to moments of downtime and/or relevant situations, instead of all the time in the middle of conversations.
Maybe I have to go back and rewrite some of the first chapter to make it easier for new players to get into the game. I'll have to think about that.
Thanks for your comment, mate. :)