Thank you for all the kind words! I really did try my best to portray Timmy's life as a neglected and bullied child accurately, without being over-the-top. Everything in the story-- supernatural happening excluded-- is based off of things that really happened to me or my friends when we were little.
Though I must tell you that the skipped and repeated text was actually a stylistic choice! It's supposed to make the player feel off-put and uncomfortable, a subtle warning that shit's about to get weird.