Nice tale. Looking at the other reviews, the story could have ended in multiple ways, but it felt like I was forced into my choices a bit. I felt personally attacked a few times, but it should probably be a source of encouragement.
Ha, yeah, that's how my brain/conscious talks back at me when I am inner monologuing, so feeling like the inner voice is attacking you probably is a little biased towards my self loathing complex. Thanks for playing!