Hey, thanks for the adventure. Neat idea and I managed to have a good time with some new players after designing the vault in TaleSpire on Steam.
Just a few things I noticed and wanted to point out:
- I saw that the character Alia/Aria's name is changed multiple times within the pdf. I went ahead with "Aria" as my choice.
- I found that the entrance to the 9. Puzzle Room had no indication where the players needed to enter it from apart from the 10. Inner Crypt after finding the Secret Door in the 2. Guard Room. I ended up making entrances on either side, since it's a low-level adventure.
Either way, good luck on future endeavours.