I think this was a pretty excellent entry.
The trail puts a unique spin on the bullet hell gameplay, favoring patience and planning more than reaction time. A simple but effective take on the theme.
Very cute and cohesive aesthetic. Fun cutscene and catchy tune.
I think a 'next' button on the cutscene slides would be nice. They stuck around a little long. And I'd be great to see the scoreboard at the main menu.