Big fan of the theme from a gameplay and aesthetic angle! Very fun faction that you've incorporated super well!
Reading it, I only really have one question for clarification, and that's regarding the "Bitter Feud" Passive ability at the top. "You take all actions as either the Light or Dark Wolf Pack..." - I can interpret this two ways and I'm not sure which one is right. Either:
- It's saying that every action requires you to declare which of the two Packs you are taking it for, but you can still switch between the Pack during the turn, and so could do some Light moves and some Dark moves in a turn, or...
- It's saying that you take all actions, (assumedly in each turn), as one of the two factions that you presumably would declare at the start of the turn. So then that turn is locked as either the Light or Dark faction, and you would not be controlling the opposing side that turn (aside from Evening #2, which clearly states "Each Pack").
Also, perhaps some way of tracking Vehemance on the board might be nice, just so you don't have to keep re-working out how much you have ready (and so it's clear that you start with 2!).
Again, fantastic faction, and none of the above is criticism, just my general confusion haha ♥