Nice job! It looks like you ran out of time on this one (which is totally fine... I think we all did in some fashion). But great job for getting something in! My main thoughts while reading:
- Nice intro that sets up what we are doing. Just watch near the end of it not to come off too cheesy.
- You have the beginning of some neat ideas in here but just needed more development.
- I like the character creation and how the villains and heroes are the same process