I really enjoy the artwork. It feels unique and fitting, and I'd love to see more of it ;).
The colour change feels so good when you go to the first story of grandpa! The luminous blues and purples <3
Your poems are clear to read, and evoke strong images. Great writing.
This felt such a wholesome game. Playing the game first, and reading some of your comments to @Belillart it makes sense, and if that was the direction you were going for all along, I appreciate your artistic freedom. But I think this art and style would have worked with less tragedy too!