I really liked this one. Only suggestion is I think if you die on the first level the dialogue should be able to be skipped if it was seen before. Also, I think the countdown should be able to be skipped with a click.
Other than this I really liked the visuals, I liked the concept, mechanics and idea of protecting the minnow. I also liked that you could select levels to see them whether you passed them or not as well as the fast forward within the level. Overall I think it is a really good game - so great job!