I can't believe it was your first publication and you did everything alone!
I especially loved the setting you created. It's very clever and artistic at the same time. In my country, we have a traditional painting called 병풍 (in English, it's called a folding screen) to describe nature, and your setting reminds me of that so much!
I also like the way you add details little by little. It made me feel like I was slowly and deeply drawn into a fantastical wolrd. Even though I couldn't breathe, I never wanted to be saved from the water you made me drown in.