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I played this with my friends yesterday! We had a lot of fun. I loved the idea you used a poker deck, so anyone can simply just start it. Even subsribed your newsletter! By the way, any recommendations for background music to listen to when I play this game again? 

Thank you so much! I still have all of this universe in my head, with more customers and their stories and want to develop them further! I will keep it going! 

Thank you so so much for your feedback! I'm the writer of the game, Weena.

It was our first game for all of us, so we really did our best. 

I wanted players to immerse themselves as Sergey/Roma, so I wrote the guide as a manual for new employees.

Indeed, there were a few more customers at the beginning when I conceived the idea of the story, but I deleted them for some reason. (I really said goodbye, literally 😢) But really, I still have all of this universe in my head and want to develop it further! 

As I've said in all of the comments here, it was my first time narrative writing in English, so when I published it, I was seriously worried a lot. Your comment really encouraged me. I truly thank you. I will keep it going and never stop learning and writing! Thank you, really!

Thank you so much! Yes, precisely. There were supposed to be more customers when I conceived the idea for the story, and I still have them in my brain. (Poor them. I deleted them and said goodbye for real.) It was my first time writing a narrative in English, so for now, I just did my best. But I still have more stories in my head, and I want to study more, work harder, and develop them further.

Honestly, I was really really worried when I published my English writing for the first time, so you never know how much your comment meant to me! I truly appreciate it. I will keep going!

Thank you for your comment! This was my first time writing a narrative English, and I was very worried about it. You never know how much your comment meant to me 🥹 

I can't believe it was your first publication and you did everything alone! 

I especially loved the setting you created. It's very clever and artistic at the same time. In my country, we have a traditional painting called 병풍 (in English, it's called a folding screen) to describe nature, and your setting reminds me of that so much! 

I also like the way you add details little by little. It made me feel like I was slowly and deeply drawn into a fantastical wolrd. Even though I couldn't breathe, I never wanted to be saved from the water you made me drown in. 

This is... just beautiful. I don't know why, but it made me cry even from the beginning. It's very nostalgic and beautiful. It's like an old fairy tale I found somewhere in a corner of the library. Please don't delete it, I want to play/read it again and again. The drawing and colours are just beautiful. Specheless.