Hi, just finished reading of the book, it was a real delight for me. The balance is so well shaped between light rules and some kind of subtle crunchiness, its like a refreshing breeze after a hard and boring day at work. I hope i will get some time to enjoy playing it soon (you know, hardstuck in real life-kids, work, obligations...). In meantime, have few typos and suggestions to report if you dont mind:
1. Typo: pg4 says F/M/W/R, guess should be F/A/W/R.
2. Suggestion: I would add explanation for +X DV in Important concepts, it overlaps with DV+/-X for untrained eye or mind.
3. Typo/Suggestion: pg19 first sentence: Trials are obstacles of strength, agility, or smarts that players are required overcome to proceed. May be:
Trials are obstacles of strength, agility, or smarts that players are required to overcome in order to proceed.
4. Question: pg16 says This treasure has a value of 1d8, meaning a player stands to make between 1 and 8 Coins for trading it using the chart provided below. The table for treasure for die results from 1-8 is 1-5 coins, or i got that wrong?
5. Questions: Are we supposed to name/make up the treasure ourselves, like 1 huge gemstone(1d8), or is there a table for that somewhere?
Sorry for the long version, its the game, it spontaneously derives exploding thoughts in my head :) Keep up the good work, cant wait for KS to begin. Have a great day!!!