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gotta say, loved the first part, good writing even though MCs reliance on Elsa is a bit too extreme overall. looking forward to a finished version and would buy that if/when that releases.

I really enjoy the story and like the writing for the most part, however in the current update I feel you rely too much on direct exposition like "Esther is sceptical. She was there..." - to me it would feel more immersive and realistic if you didnt switch to an all-knowing narrator (or at least not as much as in the current update). most of it can be easily tweaked into MCs internal monologue/observations. "Esther seems very sceptical. She was there..." for the previous example. Stuff like "Sue is jealous because MC left his phone with Aurora" just feels likea cheap way out of a conversation between those two or Sue and MC later, at least to me.
Either way, you do you and I am sure I'll enjoy the next updates as well, no matter which decision you make in this regard.

dang, I really was hoping for more, even though I already feared it was like that ;)

and yeah could be that I created my steam back in Germany, huh, never knew, thx!

keep up the good work, looking forward to it (and thanks for the quick reply)

just bought the game cause I really like the writing here, good job!

however after downloading and loading my last save I get an "this is the end of 3.5" even though it said it was episode 4.02? how do I get the rest of the content?

also; to what regions is the steam link limited to? US? Non-EU?