Oh then I will post a comment at least when there are chapters 2 and 3 or even four, that way it will give me time to see the plans you have in mind :))
I've been seeing this VN for a while (Polar Night),
We're going to start, already from the start he puts us in the bath by playing the game during the night and incredible, I was scared because of the sounds of the sound effects it was well placed and it was scary I was immersed in the game, the incredible CG, the characters the environment frankly what can I say magnificent nothing more, the writing resembles a screenwriter of course I did not notice any errors in my point of view, frankly for a horror story a score of 10 out of 10 even if it is not finished it deserves another high score especially in terms of graphics and artistic level it is a masterpiece, 5 stars
Question :
I have a question, you don't have to answer. I noticed that at the start of the game you could choose other routes. Is this the route that will change history? (for example) the choice to change boats is everything,
(PS: I'm a little bad at English, I hope I still wrote well)
In any case, I can't wait to see what happens next ^^
Even if I wanted to see the MC get fucked by Raoul that would be nice x)
So when I said maybe improve the environment a little for example, when the MC wakes up and he goes with (Raoul ) to put a little animation as if the environment was moving, or when the (MC) wakes up the animation of the environment such as for example there is wind or the leaves are falling or when the (MC) wakes up see the first time (Raoul) playing with the light effects in a dark place the character is a little dark or in a lit place we see him a little more or when he takes a shower where he is dirty we see, (these are only small ideas and suggestions) perhaps add a small animation like the eyes of the characters where he breathes (Small cutscenes even if I'm asking a little too much) so these are ideas that I give you so depending on you decide what you want to do ^^
Speaking of bugs, this is the part where you want to choose a dialogue, it seems to me that nothing is happening and so you're a bit stuck, I don't know if it's on purpose
I've been seeing this VN for a while, I'm thinking about a comment, to begin with I think the characters are magnificent, the environment, not much to say (well we'll come back to that later) especially since I like the style medieval, honestly it does the job
Question:
a quick and simple question if I understood correctly, will it have an RPG mode?
Bug:
towards the end of the Raoul road
Suggestions/Note:
well frankly I think it could be improved a little, just like the environment of the characters even if I find that there is no need to retouch them afterwards, that's just my point of view. view. see. view, plus the game is still in development, I suppose the rating I can give between 3 and 5 but I'm not going to be difficult, I give it 5 stars, I like the story I like Raoul because 'he's sexy lol
I just read your message, and I want you to know that it’s completely okay to take the time you need for yourself. Life can throw some serious curveballs, and it sounds like you’ve been through a lot recently. It takes a ton of strength to keep pushing forward after everything you’ve faced, so I’m really glad to hear that you’re on the mend and surrounded by supportive people.
Please don’t worry too much about the project or the time it’s taking. Your health and well-being come first, and the community will still be here cheering you on whenever you’re ready. We’re excited about what’s to come, but more importantly, we’re just happy to know you’re okay. Take things at your own pace—what you’ve been through isn’t easy, and your resilience is already inspiring.
Looking forward to the updates whenever they come, but no pressure! Wishing you all the best in your recovery and sending positive vibes your way. You’ve got this!
Very good I see thank you very much for answering me in any case one thing is certain I think that half of the players are used to seeing the MC in most of the other VNs
Well, I've been seeing this VN for a while, I'm thinking about a comment, since it's only the beginning, I already find the environment, the characters, the scenario a magical world, the story itself everything it's really magnificent and incredible, besides we're not going to talk about the imbecile or unbearable character of the prince who thinks he's entitled to anything, at this level I have nothing to add,
Question :
I had a question at (MC) level, what does MC look like that I didn't really understand in the comments below,
Have a question about the unique route/story? :
My question is simple: are there routes such as who we date, things like that for example, or is the story unique and unfolding and we don't need to choose what to do?
Bug:
I didn't find
The last word it remains a very good VN with its own style its own story like all the other VN with unbearable passages and funny sad moments, if I had a rating to give I think it deserves between 4 and 5 stars but I'm going to give it 5 stars, maybe I'll change it in the future but I think it deserves 7 stars
Well I came across this vn by chance I got the story from A to Z in real life the characters the scenario more nice CG/BG even if it has two or three small problems with the writing we won't talking about it I gave it a rating of 4, I will change it in the future
Man since it's your first vn I'm going to be pretty nice to be honest I think the characters aren't bad it's your first so it's normal that it looks like that plus it's good that you added specials for the face most VNs don't do this it's a shame so in my opinion you deserve at least 5 stars even if it's your first VN
So frankly for a demo I think it's really nice how can I say that it's long I don't remember at all that the beginning was like that but I imagine that it was modified given the comment below so frankly I don't have much to say at this level
CGs/BG/Sprites:
So already I find that for a demo the characters are all incredible and on the other hand I don't understand (how to explain) I don't know who is working on what but I noticed that there were lots of incomprehensible things like the art how explain the genre (MC human and MC furry) both in different styles for example it's as if the other was an HD version and the other an old version but I don't really know how to explain but I hope that you understood
Bugs:
At first I didn't notice it but I noticed that there were several times the same dialogues which of course appeared twice even if I only had this bug once towards the end but otherwise it there is nothing else
(a rating of 4)
For a demo I'm not going to say anything but for a demo it already gives a good image of this vn even if there were things or bugs it's still the only thing I can tell it in truth it's is to review the points that have been said here that's all that's all
In section 3 There's Kyo mc he was talking with another character to go to the party I continued and I didn't see any other characters I said to myself it's him
I just wanted to let you know that I totally get what you’re going through. Creating an FVN (visual novel) is no easy task, especially when you're juggling everyday life and personal expectations. It's already amazing that you took the initiative to start this project.
Don't put yourself down by calling yourself an amateur or saying you're not talented enough. Every artist, developer, and creator starts somewhere, and the fact that you're working on this, even at your own pace, is something to be proud of. Criticism and suggestions can sometimes be discouraging, especially when you don't have the time or resources to address them the way you'd like to.
Regarding the irregular updates, know that your true supporters understand that life can sometimes get in the way. Mental health and personal well-being are far more important than any project, and it's essential to find a healthy balance.
Take the time you need to work on the FVN, without pressure. Your real fans will be there, no matter how long it takes. The fact that you continue to move forward, even slowly, shows your determination and passion.
Don't lose hope and remember that you're not alone. Many people go through moments of doubt and frustration with their creative projects. You have all my support, and I'm excited to see what you accomplish, no matter how long it takes.
I really liked this VN, honestly a really nice, cool story and a lot of mystery I'm still going to add something the version where the French language had some small translation problems there were sometimes English or Ukrainian or even Spanish languages that appeared but there was nothing disturbing honestly I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Another artist who comes out of the shadows I like the style of the characters and the style of the VN and even the story continues like that I hope we can have a sequel
I saw the recent messages that I had left I wanted to ask a question can you modify the statistics do you use your software all the time and also can you send backups or not it's just a question?
It's good for the new chapter it left me his voice there was a lot of action honestly nothing to say just a bit of a shame that there's a bit of a lack of community on this VN 😦
I don't know if you see my message I'm a little sad and at the same time disgusted that you haven't found someone to help you the only advice I can give you is to try joining Discord and join the FURRY/VN community that wants to help you find a team? I don't think people here can help you :(
