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So to begin with I find that the current story for the first chapter gives a lot of information on the main character even if it remains vague personally I find for a start it remains really incredible

So far I find that the story is incredible and quite creepy, plus so far the storyline and the characters are simply stylish, I mean (Max Isa Cole) well especially (Isa) my little favorite, ( Max and Cole) quite complicated relationship level and yet they are Adorable, I can't wait to see how they will evolve, and finally I like the theme and the aspect of the game plus the audio sounds behind add so much thrill (I advise you to play the game at night with headphones) in any case I can't wait to see what happens next

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Well I just finished, personally for my part I think that for a demo it's really incredible I like the artistic style especially in terms of the characters even if I think they have updates as I just mentioned see in the comments below, in addition to the music in the background it's really excellent I don't know if it was you who created it or if you found it on Youtube but it's a good idea , the script and the scenario are frankly excellent, the CG (Jude and Sawyer) and truly magnificent, one thing is certain I support this project finally I hope that this project will not be abandoned as I could see at the end from the credits, I see that you tried to start creating VN, in any case it's your choice, I will certainly support you

For the moment the new update remains excellent I know that you still have at the beginning of your novel just one thing he should talk about the characters how to say as you can see in this sreenshot he literally speaks to himself in the void I don't know don't turn him around he has to talk with the other because otherwise it's weird don't worry it's just an example and advice x)

Hmm not bad not bad to start it's already good

oh my god I loved the story, I especially liked the sexy dragon ~ and hot ~ it was a good idea to have three different points of view on three different characters

well I am happy with the new update and the CG are magnificent

AI u_u

Honestly to begin with it's interesting how can I say there is mystery in addition to managing a hotel the very impressive characters especially (Gordon) and (Rufus) for the moment I am not going to put any notes but don't worry I will put just one note when the game would have a little more content take your time in any case it was a good adventure I can't wait to see what happens next x)

I'm happy to see how much you developed the story, I really liked it, honestly, amazing

I will definitely restart the game

Oh I see you can take all the time you need even if I really want to help you basically but I don't work and I'm currently at university

Well how can I put it, I liked it of course even if it's a prototype it's still a story I can't wait to see the characters

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I don't have any comments to say but I can just say this, I have already shared this VN with other friends and I think the story was incredible there were moments of sadness, joy and angry it's crazy honestly 5 stars without hesitation

Well what can I say this VN is just incredible the story the characters the scenario the scenario and the incredible CGs

Oh then I will post a comment at least when there are chapters 2 and 3 or even four, that way it will give me time to see the plans you have in mind :))

I've been seeing this VN for a while (Polar Night),

We're going to start, already from the start he puts us in the bath by playing the game during the night and incredible, I was scared because of the sounds of the sound effects it was well placed and it was scary I was immersed in the game, the incredible CG, the characters the environment frankly what can I say magnificent nothing more, the writing resembles a screenwriter of course I did not notice any errors in my point of view, frankly for a horror story a score of 10 out of 10 even if it is not finished it deserves another high score especially in terms of graphics and artistic level it is a masterpiece, 5 stars

Question :

I have a question, you don't have to answer. I noticed that at the start of the game you could choose other routes. Is this the route that will change history? (for example) the choice to change boats is everything,

(PS: I'm a little bad at English, I hope I still wrote well)

In any case, I can't wait to see what happens next ^^

For a start of this VN it's incredible,😁👍 the characters and the scenario👌 frankly the only rating I can give is a 5 stars

(be careful, I will change it in the future but in any case congratulations)

Even if I wanted to see the MC get fucked by Raoul that would be nice x)

So when I said maybe improve the environment a little for example, when the MC wakes up and he goes with (Raoul ) to put a little animation as if the environment was moving, or when the (MC) wakes up the animation of the environment such as for example there is wind or the leaves are falling or when the (MC) wakes up see the first time (Raoul) playing with the light effects in a dark place the character is a little dark or in a lit place we see him a little more or when he takes a shower where he is dirty we see, (these are only small ideas and suggestions) perhaps add a small animation like the eyes of the characters where he breathes (Small cutscenes even if I'm asking a little too much) so these are ideas that I give you so depending on you decide what you want to do ^^


Speaking of bugs, this is the part where you want to choose a dialogue, it seems to me that nothing is happening and so you're a bit stuck, I don't know if it's on purpose

I've been seeing this VN for a while, I'm thinking about a comment, to begin with I think the characters are magnificent, the environment, not much to say (well we'll come back to that later) especially since I like the style medieval, honestly it does the job

Question:

a quick and simple question if I understood correctly, will it have an RPG mode?

Bug:

towards the end of the Raoul road

Suggestions/Note:

well frankly I think it could be improved a little, just like the environment of the characters even if I find that there is no need to retouch them afterwards, that's just my point of view. view. see. view, plus the game is still in development, I suppose the rating I can give between 3 and 5 but I'm not going to be difficult, I give it 5 stars, I like the story I like Raoul because 'he's sexy lol

Hey

-Ez3

I just read your message, and I want you to know that it’s completely okay to take the time you need for yourself. Life can throw some serious curveballs, and it sounds like you’ve been through a lot recently. It takes a ton of strength to keep pushing forward after everything you’ve faced, so I’m really glad to hear that you’re on the mend and surrounded by supportive people.

Please don’t worry too much about the project or the time it’s taking. Your health and well-being come first, and the community will still be here cheering you on whenever you’re ready. We’re excited about what’s to come, but more importantly, we’re just happy to know you’re okay. Take things at your own pace—what you’ve been through isn’t easy, and your resilience is already inspiring.

Looking forward to the updates whenever they come, but no pressure! Wishing you all the best in your recovery and sending positive vibes your way. You’ve got this!

Take care and talk soon! ✨

Very good I see thank you very much for answering me in any case one thing is certain I think that half of the players are used to seeing the MC in most of the other VNs

Well, I've been seeing this VN for a while, I'm thinking about a comment, since it's only the beginning, I already find the environment, the characters, the scenario a magical world, the story itself everything it's really magnificent and incredible, besides we're not going to talk about the imbecile or unbearable character of the prince who thinks he's entitled to anything, at this level I have nothing to add,

Question :

I had a question at (MC) level, what does MC look like that I didn't really understand in the comments below,

Have a question about the unique route/story? :

My question is simple: are there routes such as who we date, things like that for example, or is the story unique and unfolding and we don't need to choose what to do?

Bug:

I didn't find

The last word it remains a very good VN with its own style its own story like all the other VN with unbearable passages and funny sad moments, if I had a rating to give I think it deserves between 4 and 5 stars but I'm going to give it 5 stars, maybe I'll change it in the future but I think it deserves 7 stars

Well I came across this vn by chance I got the story from A to Z in real life the characters the scenario more nice CG/BG even if it has two or three small problems with the writing we won't talking about it I gave it a rating of 4, I will change it in the future

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Man since it's your first vn I'm going to be pretty nice to be honest I think the characters aren't bad it's your first so it's normal that it looks like that plus it's good that you added specials for the face most VNs don't do this it's a shame so in my opinion you deserve at least 5 stars even if it's your first VN

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Don't worry, it's good to rediscover history

Don't worry I already have your discord server I just need to edit my profile but that's it :)

But you are preparing something heavy for us, frankly I am waiting to see what happens next 

I also had a question to ask you, do you work alone?

VN Nice:

So frankly for a demo I think it's really nice how can I say that it's long I don't remember at all that the beginning was like that but I imagine that it was modified given the comment below so frankly I don't have much to say at this level

CGs/BG/Sprites:

So already I find that for a demo the characters are all incredible and on the other hand I don't understand (how to explain) I don't know who is working on what but I noticed that there were lots of incomprehensible things like the art how explain the genre (MC human and MC furry) both in different styles for example it's as if the other was an HD version and the other an old version but I don't really know how to explain but I hope that you understood

Bugs:

At first I didn't notice it but I noticed that there were several times the same dialogues which of course appeared twice even if I only had this bug once towards the end but otherwise it there is nothing else

(a rating of 4)

For a demo I'm not going to say anything but for a demo it already gives a good image of this vn even if there were things or bugs it's still the only thing I can tell it in truth it's is to review the points that have been said here that's all that's all

One question, is this VN NSFW or SFW?

Puro and Djmadeye Basically you both have to follow each other to be able to chat in DM otherwise you have to activate DM for everyone

In section 3 There's Kyo mc he was talking with another character to go to the party I continued and I didn't see any other characters I said to myself it's him

Do you want to talk about the character that has a name???