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A topic by Puromaruツ created Aug 24, 2024 Views: 399 Replies: 11
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The MC is incredible I'm going to avoid spoiling here but frankly I didn't expect to see something like that the story has totally changed so here are the Astros of the mc it's incredible and frankly there have been a lot of twists and turns there there have been a lot of events a lot of sadness and anger plus I like the new MC he will become my favorite I think 5 stars I will change in the future but for sure I will leave 5 stars maybe leave a little comment

Developer(+2)

Thanks a lot ! I did my best ahah

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VN Nice:

So frankly for a demo I think it's really nice how can I say that it's long I don't remember at all that the beginning was like that but I imagine that it was modified given the comment below so frankly I don't have much to say at this level

CGs/BG/Sprites:

So already I find that for a demo the characters are all incredible and on the other hand I don't understand (how to explain) I don't know who is working on what but I noticed that there were lots of incomprehensible things like the art how explain the genre (MC human and MC furry) both in different styles for example it's as if the other was an HD version and the other an old version but I don't really know how to explain but I hope that you understood

Bugs:

At first I didn't notice it but I noticed that there were several times the same dialogues which of course appeared twice even if I only had this bug once towards the end but otherwise it there is nothing else

(a rating of 4)

For a demo I'm not going to say anything but for a demo it already gives a good image of this vn even if there were things or bugs it's still the only thing I can tell it in truth it's is to review the points that have been said here that's all that's all

One question, is this VN NSFW or SFW?

Developer

Thanks a lot for your feedback! Don't hesitate to join the Discord to let me know about any other possible upgrades I can make to the game and dialogue, as well as for any typos you find! To answer your question, yes, this game will include NSFW content in the future.

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Don't worry I already have your discord server I just need to edit my profile but that's it :)

Developer(+1)

alright ! see you there man

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hi hi just to say that this VN we are not going to talk about the bugs since it has already been postponed don't worry just to say that I found this vn really fascinating to be honest I like reading even if it It's true that rereading the same dialogue twice is a bit weird and funny but it doesn't matter so I don't really know what I think about it honestly since it's a demo so honestly I'm going to give a rating 4 stars maybe I'll change it or that would be my final rating but I'm not sure before leaving I have a question do you work alone or in a team what pushed you to create this VN last question I hope you don't get high and spend sleepless nights trying to tire to death for us :x

Developer

Yeah, I'm working alone for now, but I'm definitely open to having people join my project!

As for what motivated me to create this visual novel, I don’t have an exact answer. It started as a way to pass the time, but in the end, I found myself really enjoying the universe I was creating, and I wanted to share it with a lot of people.

And don’t worry, I might stay up super late, but I always make sure to get at least 7 hours of sleep! 🔥

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Well I think I have no more questions but the only question is will there be a sequel even if your community starts to grow little by little but what do you honestly think? at the community level at the art level and at the vn level sorry I ask questions like that but you don't have to answer them I'm just quite happy to see the way people are getting into VN creation even if it's not It's not rare but I find that it was less interesting to see the other artists who create vn and seeing their way of drawing is something?

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Developer(+1)

If my game gets supported, shared, and I receive some donations, I could definitely start working on the chapter 1. Even though the whole story is already in my head, the community's support would be a huge help in bringing the project to life.

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I liked the story too, I want the part when the MC realizes he is in another body & with the blue & red sparks around him to be more traumatic  

is this story similar to asterios ?