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Thank you for taking your time leaving a nice review even after coming across an annoyance point.

I instantly noticed what you meant as well. There's no cast shadow from the hallway to the living room, just a black void down there. No indication at all...  And Fixed.  :)

Thank you for your kind words and the words of encouragement Deimos!

It really warmed up my little heart.

Wow such nice words for my little game, thank you. :D

In order to go upstairs, you need to either interact with the box in the kitchen. 

Or interact with all five bodies downstairs and then go to the living room.

I hope this helps. :)

This has been updated four times since first upload.

I added sprites to all scenes, rewrote all first drafts to be less generalized and more character focused and I added four more rooms to explore.

Thank you for the nice review mop! :)

I'm gonna polish this all the way up to the end of the month. Perhaps that could turn that 7.5 into a 7.6 :D

Never done horror before... Never done anything, I learned a lot but, will I use it? It also exhausted me, writing kinetic is so much easier.

Thank you for taking your time to give me a quick review, I really do appreciate any comment I get.

Regarding spelling, just like my art I am working on it.

Regarding weird, I wonder if I accidentally told google to add it to the word list because shit... it really is misspelled throughout.

Although they almost look like it, the screenshots are not in chronological order.

I just found it funny how I could make em tell a  little story by doing it like that. You know what? I'm even gonna add a key dangling.

Just note then! A key dangling scene does not appear in the novel!

Thank you! :D

It is something I think should be prioritized when uploading erotic content. 

For transparency though: As I'm not yet confident in my art nor my writing, a clear list of tags is what I lean on to be the main draw.

One thing I wonder... Is the humor noticeable? There are no loud haha moments but there should be sentences that give some mirth and I wonder did they?

Or was I so into my own story I saw ten levels too deep...

Also I wrote this in a happy relaxed none serious mindset, but will it be read like that? Will people read this in the same nature as I wrote it in?

I want to thank everyone who took their time to review this! It really made my year truthfully!

Some days I just log in and scroll the list to look and read some of them. So many nice words so many good points made. 

I will take them all to heart and do even better on my next work! I promise!

P.S. This comment was me putting Unaware College Succubus on the shelf, no more patches it's finished! I'm moving on to my next novel... Or game...

Thank you for your kind words PineappleFishCake and for taking your time to comment even when you feel diffident in your use of English.

It was true what I said at the end, No one has ever commented on my work before so  comments likes this makes me really happy. :)

Regarding your thoughts and feelings on more from me: Absolutely! I had a lot of fun doing this.

And maybe I will practice my art... A little... No promises.

Thank you, I actually felt a little like an AI when I was browsing for references since I can't draw, but with a reference, even a non-artist like me can... produce... Stuff... :)

Wow... It really was... Something this time.

Thank you, voice in my head that has commented on every single one of my game posts, Hey! What do you mean this time?

The final bit of this post reads like you're a clown that's not an indication of your writing is it?

No, I actually keep my clowning in a separate document while I write so that the story stays concise and on theme. I never want to ruin any of my work with my actual thoughts and feelings and personality... Wait isn't that what actual writing is? OH NOOO!

You blabber A lot that's not a indication of the quality of the game is it?

No it is not. I actually kept a secondary document for all my blabbering while writing to actually keep the story concise.