I'll post it in PM on F95 for you. I noticed a bit late that you had a user there.
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Regarding Hiroki2,
I fixed grammar for the first 250 lines, corrected most of the syntax in the entire thing and colored the names in script.rpy. Are you interested in that?
It's my way of paying back for not subscribing.(tbh what I've done so far would've cost $20 or more if you hired me, but free for you)
I'm farfrom finished, but it's 3AM here so I'm kinda beat.
If you can promise it's coming and that the game won't be 95% leading up to the corruption the game teases and 5% exploring it I would be happy to wait.
I think most of the frustration by people currently is that they don't know whether it's coming or not. It's not like you're lazy, so just do your thing.
What I'm saying is, maybe tease people with what's to come in your own words, as much as you can without revealing anything that at this point should be obvious.
I would be very interested in seeing how long and far it can go when they finally start giving in.
You're a talented developer and Project Hotwife has the potential to be one of the best of its kind.
However, you should take a look at the character development. Both Ed and Merry have a back and forth development that, in the end, results in no development at all. The characters need to commit more to the choices of the player. If the player is trying to keep Merry virtuous, then that pretty much fits the way she's behaving in the game, but aside from that. She's not anywhere near promiscuous enough.
At the current length of the game it wouldn't be weird if she had gone through 5 or more sexual partners, but she hasn't. She's still faithful. There's no point in doing this other than blueballing the player.
You've had a lot of interesting situations in the game that could've gone somewhere sexually, but every single time it ends in a nope and another opportunity wasted.