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Love Locked

First Impression: well the music is spoky! let's read some text! well at first i thought the text  has cool effect and it has it but  it's really painful to read long sentences. Ok no more first impression since i already finished the game.

Good points:

+ visuals (well this one is wired but the visuals it's like the double-edged sword it's looks good but not everyone can play this, me myself has had a hard time playing it. also you better stop working on this type of visuals, in the long term their going to destroy your eyes.)

+ cool anime story!

Overall:
it has fun and painful to play this. but i liked it. i want to give 7/10 but since i saw how much you tried to bring this game on play in the web format i give 8/10

Waif

First impression: I thought this was going to be cringe, and then in the middle of story i knew something bad going to happened and i wanted to close it because sad and tragedy stories really affect my mood, they can make me sick, but i read it either way and it wasn't as bad as i thought it was going to be because the story was short. well first thing i hope the dev didn't create this based on something similar... Ok i think i need to stop the review here and don't write a essay based on the subject.

Good points: 

+ Art

overall: it was short and depressing(I think you achieved your goal) 8.5/10

That Time I Reincarnated Into A Tree

First Impression: well, As a reincarnated enthusiastic, I have high hopes, let's dive in. the intro was  good, and the real game..., amazing!

Good Points:

+ different enemy, different speed, different life 

+ good art style

+ good story

Overall: Perfect, I like everything about the game, there is nothing I can point out. 10/10

this doesn't even look like made in one week,48h ...

now that's the question, I'd say probably 5 min to find the right place and 30-45 minutes played it in my background.

Wii Lounge

First Impression: well, this is the last game I review for the jam let’s see what it is about. From screenshots seems like customizing character game. And here we are tons of option to customize character but you need to be careful because sometimes it crashes.

Good Points:

Overall:

+ tons of options

Overall: this doesn’t look like it was created in 5 days but if the developer manages to do this in 5 days it’s super impressive. They are some crashes as we expect some. 8.5/10

Fallout: Washer Waters Farm

First Impression: I wanted to play this for so long but the size of it scared me off but finally it’s here, and it is well written game, with cool story and you can flirt with the robot, what else do you want?!

Good Points:

+ flirt

+ music choice

+ well written

+ good story

Overall: it’s nearly perfect but I want more dating sims content, pretty please!

The blob mini

First Impression: I was expecting a really good game because the number of people that rate this game was high. But I was completely caught of guard by average platformer!

Good Points:

+ no bug

+ cute style

+ bouncy pad

Overall: it was ok , 7.5/10

I reviewed it and it didn't change my rating. but thanks for letting me know

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Mario vs PS3

First Impression: what is this...?

Good Points:

+ story

Overall: the story was good the game nah but I liked the crab boss fight

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Wii Protect

First Impression: it’s super simple but I like how you connect this super simple game to the theme.

Good Points:

+ charming pixel arts

Overall: love it! 8/10

DS: Dimensional Shooters

First Impression: my eyes hurt when I forced to look at two screens at the same time.

Good Points:

+ solid game,

+ no bug

+ high score

Overall: other than my problem with 2 screens game, the game is solid, could have more enemy.7/10

Gen 7 SHOWDOWN

First Impression: from start I know this game was different and after open it I saw it ps3 vs Xbox 360 boxing battle but you need to find someone to play it because there is no single player, I find no one to play this with so I had to play it with myself but it wouldn’t spawn the second player in this case so I was only able to see how the game looks like and character move set not how much fun it is.

Good Points:

+ cool models

+ nice main menu

Overall: well, there is only one move and one wired jump to the back or something and the animation is not the best but it does work, so the game is actually pretty good I say.7/10

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Wario DS

First Impression: oh man I had a higher expectation, but this will do, super simple yet fun.

Good Points:

+ pedals control

Overall: it’s not bad. but wish it had other things too.


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Dual Fright

First Impression: the photos that developer showed us during jam was creepy but in the screenshots It doesn’t creepy at all let me try the game, love the menu also behind the scenes wish it contain more photos. Well, I was ready for a jump but, luckily there is none.

Good Points:

+ Behind the scenes

+ horror game, something new in the jam

+ solid game

Overall: it’s good in many ways. So, 9/10

WiiMulator

First Impression: nice main menu! Simple, and fun

Good Points:

+ menu

+ gameplay

+ story (well if you call it story)

Overall: well, everything is good if I want to be neat pick, I say I don’t like the player sprite and some arts lack perspective or depth I don’t know the word in English.

but you definitely need to add it as feature or puzzle like levels I don't know why I'm going crazy thinking about it maybe we should team up and do something? I don't know you decide and let me know if you want to work on this for a few days after jam with me or not

Mario and the Three Flowers

First Impression: Mario game, Mario game on the ice surface. Mario game on the ice with cool wall jump. Mario game on the ice with cool wall jump and wired powerups.

Good Points:

+ different kind of powerups

+ nice music

Overall: it’s not bad personally I don’t like running on the ice and playing some hard level also it was a bit hard to aim with mouse in a Mario game because I wasn’t expecting that. But overall, it was fun.7 out of 10.

First Impression: yeah, this is definitely a flappy bird, a real flappy bird.

Good Points:

+ flappy birds nothing more nothing less

Overall: everything works like every other flappy bird’s games.

Console Warpers

First Impression: it seems like a casual platformer…and yes, it is, it also uses them in this way, ok not bad, the game is fun.

Good Points:

+ music choice

+ charming visuals

+ different levels

Overall: it was fun and short, I like it maybe if you could spend all 5 days on it, you could have pay attention to small details. 8/10

yeah I already figure that out, Thank you for letting me know

Indie Game: Payback

First Impression: well, I have no idea what to expect, only Super Meat Boy.

Good Points:

+ cutscene!

+ cute style

Overall: my only complain would be lack of level, it’s more like a movie. But I’m going to give a 9 to it.

Super Mario Galaxy World

First Impression: First thing come to my mind is Sick! It’s simple and fun. It doesn’t have anything. There is no point in playing it but I love it, It’s good time killer.

Good Points:

+ interesting concept

+ good music choice

Overall: it’s not much but I hope to see a good way to motivate player keep playing this.

Imagine: Minion Fashion Show

First Impression: I have no clue what to expect but the screenshot looks super nice and kawaii. well, it said it supposed to be a prototype but it’s just a concept. So, let’s review the concept. Well fun casual game concept but that multiply stuff is going to be pain. But not my problem it’s for dev to solve.

Good Points:

+ cute concept

Overall: well I’m not going to give much score to this because if all the other dev wanted to come up with concept they could do, I’m more looking for result or prototype with potential. but I'm not going to destroy this concept if you need playtest in later stage you can message me on my discord.

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Super Mario Galaxy : UE4

First Impression: oh boy it’s not how it looked like in the dev’s videos, but let’s see… it’s cute, there is not much content as we expect, only a level to play around and OP Goomba that damage you no matter what. Well wall jump breaks easily but it’s not that bad, you can still play and try but the conversation with the Lumas will break the game you have to Alt+F4 to close it.

Good Points:

+ complex character controller

+ solid visual

+ super nice and simple UI

Overall: if we don’t look at the features that were implemented in the last few minutes, I say the is really good, I can see myself enjoy this with a vast amount of content and big world full of characters, Easter eggs and probably some new mechanic from other games because why not it’s a fan made and you can create it whatever you want! I say 7.75 out 10.

Oil Man in: Dimensional Slip (TECH DEMO)

First Impression: oh man did I have a high expectation? why did you do this to me?

Good Points:

+ oil man has a sprite!

Overall: well, I could give a higher fun rate if you only put a text to show a score or time something.... I’m just going to vote

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Darius: Mini Mail Madness

First Impression: simple and nice menu. Well, the game is not working as intended it has game breaking bug but after a few try I finally understood the concept, and them I downloaded the .exe version because I saw there is new update to fix the bug and struggle for 20 minutes before I completely say it has game breaking bugs.

Good Points:

+ lovely main menu and level selector

+ lovely art style

+ weird idea of mixing everything together

+ nice music

Overall: well small bugs are ok but I couldn’t complete even one level, well the level design wasn’t balanced even without bugs, but I do like the concept. Maybe with the few more update we could enjoy it but sake of reviewing game jams submission. I say 6 out of 10.

New Pixel bros

First Impression: well, I play this when it first came out and I felt disappointed because the player controller of this was better than my game. But I did enjoy the game until that 3rd level, I still have no idea what was that.so I’m going to play it again … well it’s just like before.

Good Points:

+ charming junky character

Overall: it’s not bad, for the amount of time you spend on it.

SuperWiitroid

First Impression: A 13 years old developer (should I go easy on him? Nah this is not the YouTube Kids, no comment stuff, I’m going to say whatever I want). Wow the intro was good. Ok the game itself, well personally I don’t like when the W is jump and Space is shoot, it makes it hard for me to control character. The game is actually to my liking. Let me play it again… (15 minutes later). I don’t know how many times I play it but it’s fun.

Good Points:

+ solid gameplay

+ solid level design

Overall: it’s fun. I do love it, wish the controls were a bit different. I do want to mention some other things that you did better than other dev in this jam that help you manage your time and actually finishing your game, but I have no idea if somebody helped you or not, if somebody helped you well that’s no problem. but if you come up with those stuff your self you are in a right track to become a professional developer if that’s what you want to become in a near future. The mark I want to give to this game is 8 out 10. Also if you had plan on expanding this game and wanted a play tester you can ask me on discord.

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Unable to Connect

First Impression: it’s Dino, no it’s Dino meets Mario

Good Points:

+ kina everything?

Overall: it’s fun experience, definitely should add it to the chrome as a bonus. 9 out of 10

Blue's Clues: Booze Cruise

First Impression: It’s the first time I have no first impression like I’m speechless.

Good Points:

+ junky visual that fits perfectly with the game and story

+ amazing music choices

Overall: honestly, I have no idea what I’ve witness but it was unique experience. 7 out of 10.

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Zelda ~ 7th Palace on Mystery Isle

First Impression: no Fullscreen, ok first thing first the game pulled me in and I played it for 10 minutes without writing anything, it’s fun! Ok after a few tries I saw the hit boxes are merciless! OK I reach the boss fight somehow, couldn’t beat it because I was at 1 heart.

Good Points:

+ good visuals

+ good story

+ good control setting

+ solid level design

+ solid amount of feature

Overall: Oh boy it’s review time; The game is amazing! But disappoint you in the worst way possible. Like the hit box is such a pain to deal with, the save will break if you save twice like it’s save your heart but not your progress and location! The movement is good but the animation is not how it should be. You have better chance of staying alive smashing the attack button than looking for the hit box of enemy and save more hearth. But anyways the story is good also the collectible makes it worth playing. I have to say this is one of the games that did pretty good at implementing features with the short amount of time and they do work, not in a long time but still it’s better to have it. Also, the game is pretty fun. I do say 9 is the good mark.

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WallE: A Cleaning Robot (fangame)

First Impression: I saw the poster and I looking for a bit more but the game absolutely destroyed my first impression, if the game thumbnail was something more related to the game, I would accept the game much more. Well back to the game, it’s simple and it’s not the best looking. But it’s certainly working as intended without any problem. anyway it's fun if you want to kill some time. 

Good Points:

+ simple

Overall: the game is simple with the solid gameplay. but could have better visual or add one or two feature like restarting the game not refreshing the page.

yeah mine too but it started to load the game after a few minutes

Mario Maker Remake {FREE}

First Impression: I played this on the second day I think, It’s Mario nothing less nothing more.

Good Points:

+ no bugs 

 Overall: well, the game is good but I see no theme, no creativity, no Story.