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thank you, I honestly think I had the time but relied too heavily in word rather than re-reading it. Next time I will have a better idea of time management.

I will be releasing a new draft and I am looking to extend the story also but could be a ways off yet.

thank you. I am planning a second draft after the Jam ends, your feedback will really help. 

ah, cool. thanks for the feedback. I will try to make that clearer in my post Jam edit.

thank you, for reading and leaving feedback. Which transition did you mean? 

thanks for taking the time to read it.  I hope it was the good kinda to taking a second to figure out, lol. 

Thanksfor reading and giving feedback. I fully intend on reworking this after and sharing it in on FB and Reddit. I also intend on fleshing it out more. I want to know what the black eyed creature was.

I was using word on my tablet. I don't know what it is but it's autocorrect really likes to mess with me. Think I'm gonna go back to grammerly

thanks you for reading and commenting. I agree about the grammar, I read back over it just after the jam finished and saw all the little errors.

really enjoyed this idea. Unique interpretation