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Yeah understandable and agreed. If only we all could speak the same language... and maybe it shouldn't be English.

I'm struggling a lot because it is only in French. I can't really pass judgements until I can better understand the game.

Hey @Xperiment I really love the game you've made, it is hella fun. It would be cool if you could add MC character art. I do understand modular art is difficult, both in drawing and coding but I've seen it done by a few others most prominent example being Wolfbite's Extracurricular Activities and I am by no means expecting full CG's with the MC like the aforementioned game (Very fucking impressive that the modular art is included in the CGs). I think it would be more than just blank silhouette figure.

Be submissive, passive, or compliant. Especially in cases of showing authority or being bossed around.

I must agree, I understand that you created this world with love and want to share this with everyone, but it would be better to make this more game-like instead of visual novel-like. You went into great detail explaining S.I.A. but your systems don't matter much if one cannot interact with them. Allow the players to explore the world and discover this lore for themselves instead of it just being told to you in a massive unending dialog. You have a wonderful idea that I would love to experience but your presentation and execution is too indigestible.

If you do wish to keep the visual novel aspect. Here are few key points. It is a novel, the system itself doesn't function for the viewer but for the protagonist. It is also in itself a character as well as a tool, we don't really need to know much more than that.
To address the pacing issue, we should look at the second character Sia. Sia is supposed to be an artificial intelligence but is acting far to consciously in that regard. An AI's singular goal is to complete its programing putting it into a reactionary role. PC should be the one in the active asking, questions and giving Sia further directives.  Having the character be the active party and making the discoveries naturally, you can have your world be revealed bit by bit in a far more consumable manner while also providing gaps for other things to happen.

Best one yet! Is it just me or does the character not have a beard at all? Beard is on by default but if he doesn't have one why is the option there at all? Honestly I'm just pointing it out because I'm not a beard fan though I love body hair.

Bara Plants vs Zombies? Sure I'm in.

Reporting an untranslated line in the midst of the make up test at college, after the second question the character says "Ok, talves eu devesse ter prestado mais atancao nas aulas, nao dormido" Google says he should have paid more attention in class instead of sleeping. LOL

I don't mean to disrespect you as an artist or person or belittle your effort and work. It is still very expensive for $4 a picture. The comment 'oh its cheaper if you follow me on patreon' still sounds really bad. Yes that isn't exactly what you said but that is how it sounds to me when I read it especially with "and wait for them to be sent" which in itself sound extremely yikes.

All of this really makes me run for the hills not buy the art outright nor provide money in a monthly subscription.

You need to find the diary first.

Yes you can have fun with the ex-bully and his voyeress gf.

You can do you your cousin too I think but I'm not much of a twink x twink guy so I instead went with the slightly more twunk ex-bully.

You can also get a really hot gloryhole scene during the missing item incident.

Yes mute the voices in the sounds tab. There are a couple instances where it suddenly starts talking to you but I think this is an audio glitch. 

One is volunteering for the Heimlich demonstration but it only says like one or two words then disappears again.

The other is right after being honest during the standing in file, a strange scene appears that makes no sense where you are sitting in some sort of court martial and the "justice" speaks and you character responds and then suddenly you are sitting in the locker room.

find the book before going to the bathroom. Then be indecent.

Not worth it to me, you don't even get one full story without author asking for an actually pretty hefty subscription for only this one story and more for more. 

Granted this is only a side project and you likely get access to the main project too.

It does look quite professional so maybe there is something to it but I'm not going to find out.

Hey I think this is a bug. Conquered city states cannot be attacked.

eh it's fine but now you know. It was Twitter what can you expect. Plus here I am using itch and YouTube most definitely counts too.

Ikr he's my fav as a total bottom boy. With Baaltazhar being second I just wish he had short hair (no beard) but thats a personal preference.

Im not starting an x profile for this, because seriously eff SM. My vote goes to Ren or Elias if PC tops. Axel or Baaltazhar if PC bottom.

I just mean as far as genre goes there isn't enough. I'm not so into master/slave or dom/sub but I'm a big daemophile... and magic, big into magic.

Absolutely Hot AF. Congrats on your English, no spelling or grammar errors that I caught then again I was horny... You used it better then many native speakers could. Keep going because this is something we need more of. Please and Thank You.

This sounds so cute and a perfect game to put on mobile if you can. Unfortunately I can't play it though I am working on rectifying that.

I'll to get back to you on specs cause i gotta find that info. I think however its more toward user caused software issue because i've never taken good care of my phone and work it worse the a horse. It's only a couple years old though so should be closer to 10.

Im sorry but the game just isn't running for me. I'm using android and when I do anything aside from move up until the second slime it crashes. Full on hard crash completely restarting the game. Granted it might just be my phone but it is disappointing to be completely unable to play the game.

I wish i could rate because i'd 3.5 it. Its super stinking cute but abruptly short and straight to the point.

Your health is more important. You can't make new content if your body gets destroyed or worse, so please make sure to follow doctor's orders and make a full recovery. May your surgery go without complications and your recovery be swift. Until then my prayers and thoughts are with you.

Ouch... when you don't have a computer cause it broke. 💔 

I like this a lot. Gimme more please. At your own pace of course but hurry I'm impatient already.

😈 Good, Good, come to the dark side...

We have cookies! 😃 And immortal love 😍! 

Having seperate stories was cute. But please unify, 1 its easier for you second it easier for us.

This is occurring on Android 6.0 ver. I am hanging around the tavern at night and repeatedly hanging around the bar and it will suddenly kick me to the main menu. I think this is because I am getting a bugged RNG event. I've been getting Finn's event very often, I'm getting the Bear couple, guess the gamble event, and talk to various bar patrons. I've also gotten Rohan's event a few times but haven't since the apology event and I also got Thomas' event once.

Also, Flint appeared in the tavern in an early scene in which I haven't even visited the forest, but I don't have more details than that.

awesome I'll try it in when I can... thank you. This is just an idea, what if the penalty for hungry or tired interactions is cranky responses that lower affection like lust causing suspicious actions.

Ok this new update is problematic, it is making the game near unplayable. The Lust is understandable but it just keeps giving me errors instead of effecting anything at least with Father. Hunger and Sleep are causing the problems. The only way one can eat is either by spending your money which can be very dangerous to get because both of them do not tick down consistently, or waiting for family dinner which is also dangerous. (My hunger decreased by 2 hours during a 1 hour chat action.) The first time I worked I red zoned on both... I was green on both before that. Sleep isn't functioning properly and is going straight from green to 0 hours.  I've played for 20 minutes and encountered sudden "death" 5 times or so and it is not fun trying to balance all of this. IMO drop the "survival" elements, don't just end the game, punish or reward in other ways.

Amazing Start and I love Kell, he is such a sweetheart. I'm definitely following and here for the ride. I'm not going to rate just yet because baby here is not finished cooking in the oven. I can't wait for another helping though.

Hey Luriel, Right in Chapter 1 of Season 2 following the Order path, It looks likely that it is effecting all four of your fellow soldiers but I'm most interested in Brayden and his sex scene but its broken and unavailable. When waking up for the first time only clicking on the second one (Allard's favorite) does not yield an error message. I did not test much further but after choosing Brayden's favorite and then selecting Brayden during Training receives 3 (technically more but I'm counting stacks together) error messages and you get no sex scene and I am assuming no favor towards the later favor requirements.

The Waiter job isn't functioning properly... it only is presenting the yelling man but when you "feed him" you go to the Sid in the closet..

Is PayPal really the only payment you accept. I've only known horror in trying to use it. I want to support but I don't want to be forced to use PayPal or Patreon.

I think he may add epilouges at some point but idk.

I love this game so much. I am slightly disappointed by Grifter's and Chester's routes not having a loading screen portrait. Also there are a bug on the android version in Darius's route. When you select no mane the CGs can still have it but what makes it obvious that it is a bug is during the hand job on the bed CG half way through it switches from mane to no mane.

That's on purpose... click ignore.

TYVM

Can you start spacing things please. Some people can read giant blocks of text but more can't or won't. It becomes intimidating and lacking in natural pauses for the reader to process things.