Let me preface this with an appreciation for reaching out to share your story and creation. Now for judgements based solely on presentation and assumptions. First the game doesn't look bad at all, though I am not a fan of it being presented prior to translation to English but I'm just bitterly a monolinguist but am glad to hear that it could possibly be translated. Second, really not a fan of profile requirements and microtransactions... that shit always hate our hostilely nepotist and vehemently "capitalist" economy, but I do appreciate that you are upfront about it. Lastly, I am skeptical to your actual ability to translate this project as your page description leaves a lot to be desired because either it's a barely passable translation or not a very good AI creation.  It's off-putting as the wording, adjectives, and grammar are all just... para-natural, like giving off that uncanny valley kind of feel. I.E. it describes the characters as Furry Orcs and as Orcs in the first two sentences when we clearly see that the characters are just simply furrys or anthropomorphic animals, I however have seen this and an inaccuracy in translation before. So again, it's just not quite right even if it is a correct translation.