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Arrived at episode 7. It's one of the best looking "expansion games". But it has a very slow progressing story. It's not very interesting and has a lot of filler. Would like to see more focus on making an engaging main story. For now it is just a 2.5/5 rating from me. (Also the butts are already a little bit too much for my taste.)

There is a size gallery in the main menu with the size developement over the episodes. Seems to be accurate. but i'm currently only in episode 4

What AI tool are you using for the image generation?

It would be also great to have  a small icon that indicates wether you already have an image in the album or not. Like an checkmark. And also a counter that tell you how many images there are left to collect (x/y).

At the start you can change the words used to describe their relationships. The default is the tenant, roommates, landlord stuff. All this forbidden talk makes much more sense when you replace it with siblings, brother, sister and mom. The default is just the "legal"version.

I'm now in episode 5 and i'm really liking it now. Episode 4 made the feels shine through my robot facade.

But i have two questions:

1. Is there a problem with the program? I have unlocked every image up until now, but the four images after the one with Emma in the store, are still locked.

2. Will you reveal who set Gwens pillow on fire? ;P

Masters are made, not born. No reason to apologize. That's one of the reasons i gave it another try.

But maybe you can answer me two question: How long does rendering an image take? And what tool do you use? Blender?

Now i know what the problem is. Especially at the beginning his "thoughts" are an exposition dump. And the way all charakters talk, feels very unnatural. I don't know anyone, who talks like that (and thinks like that... but i can't read minds, so who knows ;P). Both these points made him look like a "smart ass". Overanalyzing everything and talking/ giving advice in a very formal manner.

But in episode 2 it get's better, because the amount of exposition is reduced. I'm in Episode 3 now and it gets interesting now. 

My suggestions on how to fix these problems (by someone who has never written anything... ;P):

1. Let them talk more casual.

2. Reduce "exposition thoughts". A rule in movies is "show, don't tell". Since this is a "visual" novell, it should be possible. I know, it's more work.

3. When characters are talking to each other, make thoughts shorter. Normal people do not have much time to analyze every detail when talking to someone. 

4. Big thinking can happen when a character is alone.

But i will continue reading now, because i'm excited to see what these heartbreaking moments later are.

Tried two times to play it... just had to stop. The guy is such a smart ass. Does it get better ? If not, i'm not able to continue.

I just started the nun case and inspected the body... have you been "inspired" by a detective conan case? ;)

The anal scenes are all the same and could be vaginal because you don't see anything. Disapointing.

Why no ambient occlusion or global illumination? The images are prerendered, or am i wrong?