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hehhehehheheheheeh >:3

i really enjoyed chapter 13 and i cant wait to play .14 tho before you continue with additional chapters i think you ought to make changes to the set up you have its caused for a bit of dismay if the party hasnt engaged with the content of your literature before i refer to the splitting of chapters between 8 and 9 where you are required to download a different version to continue 

oh? a remake?  interesting i do like your vn its just, well it has a lot going on to say the least.

also if you could build some sort of navigational system into the vn so people can more easily tell if they are headed towards and ending/death theyve already got that would be great.

both

oh dang i had no idea this vn wasnt finished thought it ended in a fair spot even tho it was so short

is there a guide posted somewhere this vn is insane lol

ok you win (god why do i have a boner)

i like snuff too~ *i say as i french kiss the tip of your gun*

aww what a cutie i could just gobble u up <3

lol ik bud

dang it im here yelling at my screen cuz how much of a ding bat our mc can be lol ahhahahhhahahahhaaaahhhhhhh

dang it 

oh... maybe it was a bad idea to look at the comments rn...

choads are nice :3

agreed qwp

ah, yes "please forgive me sir for i do not comprehend English well therefor this passage of texts may hold some mistakes so please i recite please forgive my lack of competence" type vibe

 lmao dude youre good prob better than the rest of us engish speakers even more so if youre still learning lol

im not sure who drew the art im guessing the writer did but youd like to read another vn in a similar setting then i think Devils gambit is a great recommend for u tho it focuses a lot more on romance rather than this one

ok the different sprits just for expressing eye movements is a touch i wished all vns had this is awesome i love it so much wkej;oiug[wiuger[iq

his sprite has started to grow on me but its still a lil creepy lol tho the only sprites i have an issue with are his forward facing ones

OMG its already implemented nvm thank u dude <3333333

actually giving it a second look its not as bad as i thought tho id still like to advocate for the access ability for the whole vn

i love your vn so far but could you pretty please give us the option to change the font in the journal, cursive really hurts my head to read.

 maybe the font it gets replaced with could be the opendyslexic font please thank you <3

np also chime cards can be reloaded for free at any Walgreens but youd need 20usd+

idk what winny is

probably one of the best vns ever made so far it feels realistic while at the same time providing some horror aspects although i have seen other detective related media get you to think more about their cases/mysteries this is still a wonderful vn and i cant wait for more of it

if u dont want a fee u could try an online app like cashapp, paypal, or chime and have someone send u the money digitaly

itd be so poggers for this to get turned into an actual novel

if u love this and havent heard of these then check out cienie and raincheck they are also pretty good fvns

rip HoneyBear11 may all your husbondos be wolven

same i almost didnt read it cuz Lokens sprite was a lil too creepy for my taste but im glad my friend pushed this on me if you havent read them this vn also reminds me a bit of echo and remember the flowers and if you like sifi i think youll really enjoy rtf 

mreow~ 

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i like this vn so far, but man loken his sprite is so creepy qwp the muzzle on it is waaay too small for one thing and it makes our 35ish pup look more like hes 5 month old i get its the style and the possible impacations but his side profile and other cut scenes dont look like that if its necesary for the LOOOOORREEE its already present with the other spites and i think some look great in the style but please at least think of replacing some of lokens sprites with something less human like is uncanny and he is the one we see the most of

hang on one moment thats not what i- *clings to the webpage code for dear life*

a free pass with popping those larges cumbies would be nice please also could we get a few more levels and maybe a sex cut scene for each win ending 

actually yeah a free pass with popping those larges cumbies would be nice please also could we get a few more levels and maybe a sex cut scene for each win ending 

Po I have a super good idea for this game!!!

could u consider adding a "watch" feature where two or more of the doms play together and make you watch or something like that

po??? you made a vn??? owepijfw'lsknv;lBS'EPIGH3PRWIV'K'LVNSOIVDH'IG4WHE (thank you)

do we have the option to change the mc to a guy?

damn 10 downvotes come on help the gay homie out brotha 

whoa dude i havent even read what your game is about cool it with the amazingly customized itch.io web page  

Postscript: also i love the leaf cursor; chiefs kiss.