a few things:
His wife is said to have to little "meat" to satisfy him, at first i thought she is just thin but bro(angel) is anarexic, so i thing dude(Protag) wanted dick.
Give bro something to eat he looks far to thin, as compared with the main menu.
the Dude, his Va needs to do something different .
The text box should scrool or jump with the text or atleast not add half a paige of white space only to fill it up, the way it is now is just inconvinent.