I don't wanna sound like I'm being nitpicky, but your feet/inches - centimeter conversions are pretty off. 175 is about 5'9", 180 is about 5'11" 178 is about 5'10", etc.
I was pretty confused when I saw 5'7" - a height that is shorter than me - compared to 175 cm - a height that is taller than me. Otherwise, super excited to see where this goes
The lack of nsfw games aimed at women is incredibly severe, so thank you so much for participating in bridging that gap.I played all routes + the true ending and I liked the game so much. All the people in the comments complaining about the content are being kinda silly for not understanding that there is nothing particularly immoral about different sexual preferences (especially the ones in the game which were relatively ordinary). I loved all of the emotional connection with the characters - imo that makes the sexy parts even better and I was really satisfied with all of the animated scenes too. I wasn't into everything that was in the game but really liked that all the characters had distinct, human personalities. Great Job. 11/10
The switching around of acts confused me a bit and there were a couple of places where the section was the same but the continuity felt off, the only major one I can think of is when it refers to the pet, Chino, as a dog and a cat in the same sentence.
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I totally love this!!!!
I get distracted and bored really easily, but the plot was super engaging and overall, it's really well written. You've got a diamond in the rough; this piece has a lot of potential and I look forward to seeing where it goes. Great work. I've been reading a lot of interactive fiction lately and so far, this is among my favorites.
Looks promising but here are some issues - the kneel vs stay standing in the very beginning are reversed - if you click kneel, it proceeds with the stay standing choice and vice versa. Additionally, there is an error message after both choices when you choose whether or not to forge your own weapon when sparring with Jorin.
Bruh... I was already going to comment on how great this game and storyline were, every time I thought it was nearing the end, there was another twist, but now that I've reached the end, I'm legit tearing up. This was so well written and engaging. There were several times I had to remind myself to stop and get some homework done because I just wanted to keep going. To be honest, although the puzzle aspect was good, the story was so good that I just wanted to skip the puzzles to find out what happened next.
